I SAW A BIG MAN TODAY

I saw a big man today
who was born
without arms and legs
who didn’t learn to beg
but worked hard for success
and called everyone’s bluff
and married a catch

his excuses ring valid
as we complain
about spouses who don’t
fold the laundry or put away the dishes

I saw a big man today
who loves his wife in every way
who stands taller than the rest
whose heart outdoes them all

this man will not fail
to teach us what is 
important in life

I saw a big man today
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Dome Avatar
March 14, 2024 at 2:21 PM
And I saw a tall Lady today, she wrote a poem?. What a clever post, well done. Pete,
Rodrigues Avatar
March 14, 2024 at 5:38 PM
How sweet! I appreciate that. Hugs ~ Kim
Baker Avatar
March 13, 2024 at 6:15 PM
"With God, all things are possible." The weak may become strong, the last shall become first. What a joy to read of the big man you describe so well in this poem, Kim. Thanks for sharing the good side of life with us today! You have done your part in blessings many today. Hallelujah! Another FAV! Smiles and Blessings Bill
Rodrigues Avatar
March 14, 2024 at 3:45 AM
Thank you for your kind words, Bill!
Buhagiar Avatar
March 11, 2024 at 2:23 AM
I saw a picture of such a man on Google. I felt sorry for him but reading his story, I realized he was better than me.
Rodrigues Avatar
March 11, 2024 at 11:47 AM
Perspective is crazy, right! God shows up through such people when they lean on him. Tight hugs!
Wolf Avatar
March 10, 2024 at 8:13 PM
This 'big man, indeed, stands tall compared with the rest of us. ~ gw
Rodrigues Avatar
March 11, 2024 at 11:46 AM
He really does!
M  Avatar
March 10, 2024 at 3:34 PM
A very big man Kim! An important message beautifully said my friend! Debx
Rodrigues Avatar
March 10, 2024 at 4:52 PM
Thank you, Deb!
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