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I Saw

I saw
elk frozen 
in lake. Birds pecked
out his nostrils and eyes…
Winter.


05.05.2019
Writing Challenge 1, May 2019 - Cinqku- Poetry Contest
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Copyright © Kurt Ravidas | Year Posted 2019

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May 9, 2019 at 1:19 PM

Thank you, me dear collegues. By God, you're too kind to my poetry. God bless you and your inspiration)

Caren Krutsinger

May 10, 2019 at 3:48 AM

Oh my gosh! What? I am going to sprint back to read this again. Your sense of humor is screaming with delight!

Connie Marcum Wong

May 8, 2019 at 7:54 PM

Nature can seem so cruel yet survival is paramount in Nature's kingdom. Visceral imagery well written. : )

Anne-Lise Andresen

May 8, 2019 at 3:28 AM

- A great picture of a cold winter, Kurt - Winner wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

May 6, 2019 at 8:23 PM

So graphic! Visual 11-alarm fire!! I'm reeling from picturing it in my mind. ~ gw

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