I Saw

I saw elk frozen in lake. Birds pecked out his nostrils and eyes… Winter. 05.05.2019 Writing Challenge 1, May 2019 - Cinqku- Poetry Contest Dear Heart

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Kurt Ravidas

Date: 5/9/2019 1:19:00 PM

Thank you, me dear collegues. By God, you're too kind to my poetry. God bless you and your inspiration)

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/10/2019 3:48:00 AM

Oh my gosh! What? I am going to sprint back to read this again. Your sense of humor is screaming with delight!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/8/2019 7:54:00 PM

Nature can seem so cruel yet survival is paramount in Nature's kingdom. Visceral imagery well written. : )

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/8/2019 3:28:00 AM

- A great picture of a cold winter, Kurt - Winner wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 5/6/2019 8:23:00 PM

So graphic! Visual 11-alarm fire!! I'm reeling from picturing it in my mind. ~ gw