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I saved this dance just for U

A rainy shoulders kiss Traveling from peak to peak. Once a weary well, still rooted in green. She found herself greeting the spine of a haircap’s beam. Like déjà Vu for the trees, only petrichor can fuel these roaring needs, And as our strings entwine, let the leaves whirl in this time. After all it’s our love, divine.

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Date: 11/19/2024 1:27:00 PM
Hey belated welcome to PS JJ
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JJ Wiparina
Date: 11/19/2024 1:31:00 PM
Many thanks!!
Date: 8/13/2024 8:48:00 AM
It was one of the featured poems of the week on Poetry Soup Home page. It introduces you to the poetry community.
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JJ Wiparina
Date: 8/13/2024 8:51:00 AM
Wow I had no clue, sad that I missed that. How do they decide who makes it on?
Date: 8/3/2024 11:09:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week. Welcome to the soup. I look forward to reading more of your poems.
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JJ Wiparina
Date: 8/13/2024 8:31:00 AM
I believe I am unaware but what was it featured in?
Date: 7/4/2024 1:39:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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