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I Sat Beside a Dead Fox

river. gold liquidcopper sheen & skypulp mashed upon fatrocked banks refracted beams; reflections. The kid squeal. The rowers chirp "hello" [multiple oar-chasm] we bridge it with a languid arm-sigh tooing, no fro. Yes, the 20th century is over, and the "Water-Noodle" has arrived. Time works different out here. The national spine doesn't belong to a book. No. Hold land in check, meaty planes sewed onto bone. Through the geothermal corridors where karadji's file into rooms discussing the hunt laymen like me listen in on dragonfly wings. Cherubs land.... "Mum, you're an old fart!" snorty laughs splashy goodness erections stay low. Kookaburras slot into. Their laugh lingers like a splinter in my throat and I don't follow. Family's an ascending arc orbiting this chubby orphan (he is all sickle, shaped like a question mark.) Re-arrangements. "I want to see if the wombat's home!" He's a dad alright, his salt 'n' pepper laugh more convincing than George Clooney. Paper grows inside us in wet reams. It's all an odd proud thing, this lick of space. The noise retreats, my heady sight dangles. Dizzy eyeball flesh in quicksand vaguely mired. A bordered scene: a symmety of Mates bathing in coy homophobia their gargantuan cocks reaching so far to touch each other! Forbidden to break the old pattern. This goldpan face persists. Is life a Saturation? Moist is good I like moist. Hairline dwellers polite oracles. My feet naked next to cigarette butts & weed the tethering of a slight libido a moist amulet hangs like a beard; sophisticated mist from the muddy cauldron. Copyright. 2009.

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Date: 11/20/2009 12:56:00 AM
Amazing work, you have a unique style. A great asset to PS...Raul
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Date: 11/17/2009 1:10:00 PM
Is life a Saturation?im still thinking about the answer to this wise question,thia wise poem,mixed with many different feelings,thoughts to ponder about too..Still thinking..love your writes Jim--Charma
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Date: 11/16/2009 2:59:00 PM
There's a mixture of poetic realism that seems grounded to your real life. There's also a mixture of creative imagination too. Your talent exceeds what is considered to be the norm, I can feel that in this poem. Some is above my head but I like that for it makes it all the more captivating of a read. Keep writing and I'll keep reading. Thanks for sharing. Love Light Patty
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Date: 11/15/2009 4:18:00 PM
very odd yet somehow endearing?"a symmety of Mates bathing" symmetry ;) Light & Love
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