I Sang To the Moon

I sang to the moon in your favorite style with lemonade lyrics and daffodil song Gathered the stars that I found in your smile, leaving the universe dark before long Moved every mountain in spite of their size, short in the middle and tall on the ends So that the sunset reflects in your eyes and to your heart every echo now sends Painted the oceans in rose petal mist, colors as soft as the touch of your hand Walked on a shoreline the waves gently kissed, followed the footprints we left in the sand Wrote you a poem of whimsical scenes, written in verses now speaking of love So that you know in my forever dreams, it’s always you that I am thinking of
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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December 6, 2016 at 6:44 AM
lovely poem , Its what's poetry all about
Erb Avatar
November 27, 2016 at 1:12 PM
It is a siren song Sung to the moon Beautiful, enchanting Leading to doom
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November 28, 2016 at 9:01 AM
Thanks so much for your visit and comment Eric.
Kassette Avatar
November 16, 2016 at 7:44 PM
nice...descriptive and meaningfully wrapped
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November 28, 2016 at 9:00 AM
Thanks so very much Kris. I appreciate your kind words.
Lindley Avatar
November 13, 2016 at 11:32 AM
Romantic, lyrical and positive message of love and its blessings. Definite 7...
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November 14, 2016 at 8:54 AM
Thanks so very much Robert for your kind thoughts.
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November 12, 2016 at 11:15 AM
WoW! Chris, this is sooo romantic. Who is this lucky girl? That inspires you to write such beautiful poetry. You put your heart in every line my friend. If you see that girl, tell her I said thank you. She causes your to pen beautiful works of art. Well done. A Big seven and a fav:-) Alexis
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November 14, 2016 at 8:54 AM
I will tell her for sure. :) Thank you so much Alexis. Your kindness always brings a smile to my face. I truly do appreciate you my friend.
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November 12, 2016 at 8:03 AM
You are ....such a special... and unique being.... your artistry.... is truely...your hearts revealing.... WOW Chris.....the whole world......needs to read this.
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November 14, 2016 at 8:53 AM
Thanks so very much my sweet friend. What a wonderful thing to say to me. I appreciate you.
Callus Avatar
November 12, 2016 at 7:59 AM
Lyrical and beautiful, with a romantic vein that runs softly through it, Chris. Truly enjoyed. Regards // paul
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November 14, 2016 at 8:52 AM
Thanks so very much Paul, your comment means a lot to me.
Chircop Avatar
November 12, 2016 at 7:02 AM
Oh to sing to the moon...At harvest time she will blush..and in a scarlet wine glass reflects its glowing gloom.I wonder what She replies back..Guess She whispers ..What a melodic tune : ).Your words really amuze and muse the seven muses..You get us thinking of things to write..Oh you..yes very talented you...Oceans in rose petal mist...and sunset in her eyes..This is not poetry...but a painting with words.Bravo..a fave.
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November 14, 2016 at 8:52 AM
Thank you Charmaine and Alexis, when I get two amazing poets commenting on my poem at the same time it is a wonderful gift indeed. Thank you both so very much.
Chircop Avatar
November 12, 2016 at 1:33 PM
Indeed He writes beautifully...so do you sweet Alexis..Hugs xxx
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November 12, 2016 at 11:18 AM
I agree with you Charma.His poems are beautiful paintings with words:-) Alexis
Smith Avatar
November 11, 2016 at 10:04 PM
So soft and light Chris, well done...
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November 14, 2016 at 8:50 AM
Thanks so very much Charlie.
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November 11, 2016 at 8:09 PM
Very enchanting poem, also very fitting as in the next few days, we shall see the moon at its largest in our lifetime!
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November 14, 2016 at 8:50 AM
Thanks so much Arthur, unfortunately it has been cloudy the last few days here but hopefully tonight I will be able to see it.
Wolf Avatar
November 11, 2016 at 8:07 PM
Gee you're prolific! Another great poem Chris. What do you think of the name Lakarna? It's my personal name for the moon, being a lunatic.
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November 14, 2016 at 8:50 AM
I like it, may I ask where it came from? I once wrote a song about a moon angel named Lomasi.
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November 11, 2016 at 7:57 PM
Pleasant touches of beauty rhythm and love all through the poem ...
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November 14, 2016 at 8:48 AM
Thank you so very much Probir for your kind words.
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