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I said on dawn “You appreared too fast “ not yet gone my Tired of fatigue still nearby covered Silence of nature sleep my niche terms myself my ground fighting dream I said on day “You lighted up my uplifting soul” Accompanied me with your rainbow plumbed nature Pursued questions looking for answer I said on night “you came before me” but truly your face touched me much stars moon what a beauty to seduce dazzle shall not go before my satisfaction my dawn my day my night satisfied don't you leave me without a conclusion hear I said on your eternity would like to pursue my fish swim would like to kiss my Rainbow would like you to hear I said ~c)Sukmawati komala ~ 18 February 2013~

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Date: 3/22/2013 10:00:00 AM
I liked this...it is very pure and beautiful. I enjoyed it, my friend...Thanks for your comments...xx Holly Moore
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