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I Rot Away..

I am with my friends. We are sitting in the balcony in open air, feeling the sky is the limit, or is it? Then i take-off. I am in wonderland or maybe it is alice. Everybody are laughing, maybe they are laughing at me. Then i notice myself laughing, maybe I'm also laughing at myself. Theories are unpredictable. Its the only time i become sucrose-tolerant. The music is soothing, taking me places. The night sky is brilliant, the stars are dazzling, i can feel the wind blow across my body. I am hungry, i am thirsty. Oh! once again, the music is amazing. Spiraling around. Then i wait... Wait till I rot away...

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Date: 9/22/2009 7:17:00 AM
was in a surreal world at tat time frankly.. thanks Doris..
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Date: 8/29/2009 7:19:00 AM
surreal write, nicely done
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Date: 8/29/2009 6:50:00 AM
Welcome to PoetrySoup Rahul. I wish you the best in your writing. Love, Carol
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