I Rot Away..

I am with my friends.
We are sitting in the balcony in open air, feeling the sky is the limit, or is it?
Then i take-off.
I am in wonderland or maybe it is alice.
Everybody are laughing, maybe they are laughing at me. 
Then i notice myself laughing, maybe I'm also laughing at myself.
Theories are unpredictable.
Its the only time i become sucrose-tolerant.
The music is soothing, taking me places.
The night sky is brilliant, the stars are dazzling, i can feel the wind blow across my body.
I am hungry, i am thirsty.
Oh! once again, the music is amazing. Spiraling around.
Then i wait... Wait till I rot away...
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C S Avatar
September 22, 2009 at 7:17 AM
was in a surreal world at tat time frankly.. thanks Doris..
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August 29, 2009 at 7:19 AM
surreal write, nicely done
Brown Avatar
August 29, 2009 at 6:50 AM
Welcome to PoetrySoup Rahul. I wish you the best in your writing. Love, Carol
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