I Rise

I see a bird fly
on blazing wings of fire
Phoenix arises
degraded trampled upon
I rise from my own ashes
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Gauthier Avatar
January 17, 2020 at 4:56 PM
I love the passion in you penning, Running Wolves.
Wolves Avatar
January 17, 2020 at 5:08 PM
thank you so very kindly
One Avatar
December 8, 2019 at 7:28 AM
brilliant... we fall, but we must rise..
Wolves Avatar
December 8, 2019 at 7:42 AM
Thank you most kindly
Dietrich Avatar
December 7, 2019 at 8:05 PM
Wonderful tanka writing, Robert.
Wolves Avatar
December 8, 2019 at 7:20 AM
Thank you this is my first and only attempt at tanka style. Your comment means the world to me.
Nicole Avatar
December 6, 2019 at 11:31 PM
I enjoy drifting in a tender sky, painted in blue- caressing those cotton candy clouds. This is beautiful in so many amazing ways. ~ Brandy
Wolves Avatar
December 6, 2019 at 11:35 PM
Thank you dear Lady for such a lovely comment.
Adams Avatar
December 6, 2019 at 7:11 PM
nice image in this one... i can picture the phoenix with wings ablaze...rising
Wolves Avatar
December 6, 2019 at 7:33 PM
Thank yee kindly T'is truly appreciated dear Lady.
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