I Rise

I see a bird fly on blazing wings of fire Phoenix arises degraded trampled upon I rise from my own ashes

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Line Gauthier

Date: 1/17/2020 4:56:00 PM

I love the passion in you penning, Running Wolves.

Running Wolves
Date: 1/17/2020 5:08:00 PM

thank you so very kindly

Silent One

Date: 12/8/2019 7:28:00 AM

brilliant... we fall, but we must rise..

Running Wolves
Date: 12/8/2019 7:42:00 AM

Thank you most kindly

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/7/2019 8:05:00 PM

Wonderful tanka writing, Robert.

Running Wolves
Date: 12/8/2019 7:20:00 AM

Thank you this is my first and only attempt at tanka style. Your comment means the world to me.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 12/6/2019 11:31:00 PM

I enjoy drifting in a tender sky, painted in blue- caressing those cotton candy clouds. This is beautiful in so many amazing ways. ~ Brandy

Running Wolves
Date: 12/6/2019 11:35:00 PM

Thank you dear Lady for such a lovely comment.

Sandra Adams

Date: 12/6/2019 7:11:00 PM

nice image in this one... i can picture the phoenix with wings ablaze...rising

Running Wolves
Date: 12/6/2019 7:33:00 PM

Thank yee kindly T'is truly appreciated dear Lady.