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For: Swap It Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Andrea Dietrich
Into the safety of imagination where I retreat the incessent drums of society no longer beat, and the world becomes my own creation where I retreat into the safety of imagination. I'd rather dwell inside a wondrous dream and dance within the sacred stream than live outside in man-made hell, inside a wondrous dream I'd rather dwell. So the doctors diagnosed me, I have a mental sickness, but they're the ones who really suffer thickness while I can simply lock the door and lose the key; I have a mental sickness, so the doctors diagnosed me.

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Date: 7/1/2024 10:09:00 AM
You did a good job here. Its good to retreat from things we hate. I do it all the time to get my mind off chronic pain. Well done and congrats
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Chetta Achara
Date: 7/1/2024 11:36:00 AM
Thank you. It was fun to write.
Date: 6/4/2024 10:10:00 PM
This is an imaginative poem. Good luck with the contest.
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Chetta Achara
Date: 6/5/2024 3:56:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 6/4/2024 4:06:00 PM
Like this! Well done!
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Chetta Achara
Date: 6/5/2024 3:55:00 PM
Thank you.

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