I Rememeber Dad

I remember ,
How your lips caressed your cigar ,
Like a woman being held around her waist ,with soft arms of assurance .

How you paced yourself perfectly ,
taking a breath every three puffs.
Easing your cigar from your lips ,kept safe by the hold of your Thumb and your index , while the smoke from your mouth and nostrils, set free and flirted with the immediate air .

And how the Ash from the tip ,broke off like a diver falling from a cliff,
But your cigar kept alive by a long inhale and a steady exhale before it slowly became estranged .
Then you repeat the process.
oh how I remember.
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Agustin Avatar
October 19, 2024 at 10:48 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Francis Avatar
February 4, 2020 at 7:55 PM
title : *I Remember Dad*
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