I Remember Your Ways

I remember your ways I remember your ways Lullabies and prayers Sung to cradle me Offered to guard me Clinging to your sleeve I drifted to sleep then And now I do it Feeling your sleeve Behind the veil of the dark night I miss your cozy sleeve I remember your ways Lullabies and prayers Kind were those pair of eyes Love was that when you smiled Happiness was the scent you carried Every time you patted me to sleep I dreamt baby angels playing with me Now I sleep wishing to see Your face in my dreams I miss your subtle savor I remember your ways Lullabies and prayers Sitting on your lap I saw a big world Now leaning back on this arm chair I see the world shrunk to a table globe I was never hunger then Now but I crave to feel your love I miss your pacifying lap I remember your ways Lullabies and prayers Crying out in pain Never knew it was in vein Following the procession Oblivious of the desertion To the grave for a dark-faced woman Years later I realized was my mommy, Who was pretty in my memory Fair and gorgeous I remember your ways Lullabies and prayers Standing alone in front of your grave Holding your best-loved roses -dated forever-

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Date: 1/2/2018 8:49:00 AM
It is my pleasure to read it again. Yes, it is that good.
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Punnia Viswan Bhatia
Date: 1/2/2018 10:53:00 AM
I am overwhelmed with this gesture of love and appreciation...:)) I wrote it for someone who was very special once, for his mom who passed away when he was a baby..
Date: 12/9/2017 8:36:00 AM
This is heart breaking and beautiful at the same time. One of your best.
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Punnia Viswan Bhatia
Date: 12/11/2017 10:06:00 AM
Thank you so much Richard for the lovely words...I feel super happy that you commented twice under this poem..love and peace...hugs and prayers for you...
Date: 8/2/2017 5:15:00 PM
Hi R.O.S.S.E A beautiful tribute to a beautiful memory. especially, "Happiness was the scent you carried". Reminds me of my mom. Great Write!
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Punnia Viswan Bhatia
Date: 8/6/2017 9:39:00 AM
Thanks Ralph for the inspiring and lovely comment. I am happy that you remembered your mother. Love and hugs..god bless..
Date: 5/30/2017 7:48:00 AM
outstanding beautifully painted piece
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Punnia Viswan Bhatia
Date: 5/30/2017 7:59:00 AM
Thank you Liam..hope you are doing fine and healthy
Date: 3/31/2017 5:52:00 AM
That last stanza really engages the heart. Beautiful write.
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Punnia Viswan Bhatia
Date: 4/3/2017 10:42:00 AM
thank you Scott! :) God Bless!! :))
Date: 3/4/2017 7:42:00 AM
I can't believe I am the only one to comment on this work of art. Bravo and a well deserved 7.
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Date: 3/6/2017 1:50:00 AM
Thank you Richard for a million value comment! :) Love & Peace Punnia
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