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I Remember You My Lover

I REMEMBER YOU  my lover         

  HOW  LONELINESS HAD SMUGGLED OUR LIVES

OUR JOURNEY STARTED WITH PURE VERSES

WHEN I SAW THAT LOVE IN YOUR EYES

I REMEMBER MY LOVE. I  do REMEMBER

TODAY MY HEART WRITHES,

THE SORROW OF SEPARATION

WEAKENS MY HEART…

ONE MORE TIME…

 I WISH TO MERGE IN YOUR DREAMS,

DRINK THE WINE OF YOUR LIPS

FEEL THE WARMTH OF YOUR ARMS

RUN  INTO YOUR VEINS

And rest ON YOUR STURDY SHOULDER

 Now TEARS HAVE BARGED INTO MY LIFE

HAPPINESS HAS DESERTED MY WORLD

INSOMNIA HAS blinded my sleep

BUT MY LOVER I YEARN FOR YOU

I SINK INTO YOUR DEEP THOUGHTS

THE RIVERS HAVE BECOME SILENT

BIRDS DON’T  SING ANYMORE

LEAVES HAVE FALLEN disgracefully

THE AROMATIC FLOWERS HAVE VANISHED

FEW DEAD LETTERS ARE STRUGGLING TO BREATH

YOUR VOICE ECHOES

In the valley of my heart.

I remember our unbreakable bond

Time destroys everything.

Oh my lover I remember

How I loved you

With all my heart

I remember my love , I do remember…

Copyright © Red Fiery | Year Posted 2013

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John-Ovan.P. Hull Date: 3/12/2016 10:10:00 AM Wow, very powerful and and emotional! It sounds like the two of your are meant to achieve great things together? Login to Reply

Liam Mcdaid Date: 9/24/2013 5:55:00 AM HEART TOUCHING VERY BEAUTIFUL PIECE OF WRITING Login to Reply Red Fiery Date: 3/10/2016 8:09:00 PM thank you !

Richard Lamoureux Date: 9/22/2013 6:20:00 AM This is truly one of your best! Consider changing your first line to " I remember you my lover" it fits better being you are speaking to him. You should be very proud of this piece. Rated a 7 if I could go higher I would. Login to Reply Red Fiery Date: 3/10/2016 8:11:00 PM I personally like this work as it's about me ......thank you for reading this long time back...love Red

Allan Koven Date: 9/20/2013 9:49:00 AM When a heart breaks, it is yours. When love is in bloom, it is yours. When sparks become fiery, it is yours. You who blossoms in loves grace become a living metaphor. Aphrodite,is it you? Allan Login to Reply Red Fiery Date: 9/20/2013 10:34:00 AM * SMILING*.

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/19/2013 9:39:00 AM - You have a part of his heart .... forget you? No, he never does. - Well written, Red. - Have a nice day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Red Fiery Date: 9/20/2013 10:34:00 AM Thank u. ANNE

Wayne Hill Date: 9/18/2013 9:27:00 PM I was the first person to read this :) Your poetry could fill dozens of expensive books.......your mind is like a rare alpine valley brimming with unequaled life. Login to Reply Red Fiery Date: 3/10/2016 8:12:00 PM You are very kind ! Red Fiery Date: 9/19/2013 1:02:00 AM thank you wayne...u have always been kind to me :) I am happy to see ur comments...* Hugs*