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I Remember You

As the crimson sun crawls to my farthest horizon and soft dew spills from the shadows under the curled rose petals of my years I remember you the joyous times of exhalations that shone bright like a sun's ray which split the dark hanging cloud of my existence to give me a glorious glowing time of dreams which still washes across my memory from the deep passion of your eternal soul of red-painted skies wrapped in awe and wonder which held our hearts captive like trembling fawns hidden in the lush meadow of love we once knew until the world turned dark and carried you away without notice or concern leaving me to quietly whisper goodbye to the precious love who gave my tears their worth 3/14/20

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Date: 3/21/2020 5:41:00 AM
Poetry like this exactly why I come here to enjoy reading Frederic! This incredibly beautiful poem is going into my Faves my friend! I wish I could write like this! I simply adored it! Stay safe. xxoo
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Date: 3/17/2020 9:27:00 PM
Great descriptions, passionately penned.
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Date: 3/14/2020 11:54:00 PM
Oh, wow, and that last line, just gorgeous. xomo!
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Date: 3/14/2020 8:24:00 PM
Your imagery is exquisite.
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