I Remember When

I have a faint memory  
From a time long ago I was five maybe six
I was walking a dirt path from my grand parent?s bungalow
It was early in the morning and the peat moss was everywhere

I remember my grandfather just looking at me with a smile
Then his head nudged to the left and said come along with me for a while
He?d take my hand and we went for a walk past the mist and through the brush  
It led into a thick field where blueberries were everywhere

On our way back I could see a pebble shore it was through the trees and across the way
It was on a crystal lake somewhere upstate in a town of the same name sake
And just up the road was a pasture which was part of someone?s estate
Its landscape caught my attention and would remain embedded in my mind

I remember jogging along side the road back to the view I felt drawn to.
Because I wanted to see the sun set
I went back to that pasture and watched it go down 
From the distance I could see cows grazing the land too.

I stood there just looking at everything around me
It was such a beautiful scene
A gentle breeze and the scent of flowers all around
I took the moment into my mind like a photograph in time

On the way back I notice this prairie was attached to someone?s home
There was a sign in front it was on a red brick stone wall 
It said the Johnson and Johnson estate
I stole one lasting view then ran back before it was too late 

Going the other way I could see another giant sign
It said Crystal Lake Pennsylvanian next left
I ran for the entrance and up the pebble hill
I turned back for a moment and looked across the street 

I could see the wire metal fence and the pebble shore
I took another picture into memory
Then continued running up the hill and on the dirt road 
My heart was racing cause? I thought everyone was looking for me

I could see my aunt and uncle just waving to me
Then I heard my grandmother call out my name
I could smell food in the air chicken and sweet potatoes on the Bar-B-Q
I sat down to eat and found my cousins there too.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 3/26/2010 10:32:00 AM
A very interesting and enjoyable read Ron. Thank you for sharing. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/25/2010 12:14:00 PM
Great poetic memory write..Keep the creative pen flowing...Sara
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