I Remember That Smile and Look

As I lie on my bed reading my book My mind wondered to a look and a smile Staring down on me. I turn to cry awhile. I could not stay focused; I closed the book. I remembered I had my husband's phone Number in my contacts. I reached for my Cellphone on the night table with a sigh I scrolled down to his name (Dad), only he'd known; Opened message. I've always called him Dad. When the screen came up, I typed, I love you, A heart I picked to place, when I was through, I pushed send. Tearful grief, do not think me mad. Two and a half years since he has been gone His sweet scent of utter love still lives on. 3/9/2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021


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Date: 3/31/2021 3:59:00 PM
Such a sweet poem showing your forever love for your sweetheart!!
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Date: 3/29/2021 8:02:00 PM
Sad but beautiful Eve. Sweet memories are precious but can be painful. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 3/18/2021 3:55:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. A loving/beautiful-story/write. Love your line, "Pushed send. Tearful grief, do not think me mad." Not mad just filled with memories. Good memories are the best. Have a blessed day with hugs................
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Date: 3/17/2021 4:07:00 PM
Congratulations, Eve, on your win. So touching poem ~ Mala
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Date: 3/13/2021 1:55:00 AM
So touching and deep, Eve, loved ones will always be remembered kindly:)
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Date: 3/11/2021 5:31:00 PM
Screams out TENDERNESS to me Eve Does time heal all wounds
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Date: 3/11/2021 7:36:00 AM
Precious memories. I can sense the desperation to reach out to your loved one even after he is gone. Very touching.
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Date: 3/10/2021 2:45:00 PM
This is perfectly normal behavior, Eve. In that moment, you felt a need to communicate with him. (Pres. Reagan used to call Nancy "Mommy.") Lovely sonnet. Best wishes in the contest, Carolyn
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Date: 3/10/2021 7:54:00 AM
Eve, A smile shared in the stars now. Your memories give all of them wings. Is there anything more beautifully, painfully true in life? Than a message sent with love. -Richard
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Date: 3/10/2021 6:44:00 AM
A sad one. When my granddaughter’s grandpa died, she continued to text him. One in grief wants to still reach out. Good write!
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Date: 3/10/2021 4:15:00 AM
He's always with you Eve, in your heart and the precious memories you made together. Hope you're well Tom
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Date: 3/9/2021 10:24:00 PM
I do relate with your feelings even though I do not have a phone number and do not dream of sending him/her any messages. But I carry her photo with me always in my prayer book.
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