I remember loving you

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I remember you and the promises the feel of the embrace of love the tenderness of feeling whole I remember loving you and everything it so entailed the magic of our togetherness and the mightiness of our bond Basically I remember you loving me and me loving you ~ we’re caught in a cosmic dance I’ve let the grieving take its course it fills me now with less of a longing and the healing is more of a blessing that overcomes me with gentle warmth Strange how the pain has slowly vanished to make way for waves of love that feel dauntless and eternal

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Rowena Velasco

Date: 8/6/2025 11:49:00 PM

This is so tender and healing—grief transformed into grace. Your words embrace both memory and release so beautifully. Thank you for this gentle light.

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/7/2025 4:54:00 AM

What a lovely comment ~ thanks, Rowena ~

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 8/6/2025 8:56:00 AM

such poignancy in your words, such vulnerability. Exceptionally penned!

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/6/2025 4:12:00 PM

Thank you so much for your lovely comment, Sara ~ most appreciated