I Reinvent Myself

Prancing through midnight mystery,
I called my soul to surrender
She laughed diabolically
Popped and hissed, turning gray
Then flashing orange and yellow again

Shocked at my daring side,
I began to dance, but stopped and crackled
In my failure to train myself to relinquish to anyone,
I pulled out the big sticks and began to spit and smack
Dancing and flashing, hissing and falling into myself.

Like a phoenix, my soul refused to be contained.
She whirled and twirled, turning herself into flames.
I watched in awe, as she began floating upward
I reinvent myself one hiss, pop and crackle at a time.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Eslinger Avatar
January 14, 2021 at 9:21 AM
Dynamic!Jolts me along! You & I, as friends, now, I say this gave me lots of ?s. Do you mean your soul or your spirit? Whole meaning alters depending. As described your soul seems solid & good, lovely while the spirit is it possibly giving obstinate trouble angst change &spirit like soulcould fly heavenward. ??? ??
Krutsinger Avatar
January 14, 2021 at 10:12 AM
My spirit is my soul
Wolf Avatar
January 13, 2021 at 8:22 PM
This is rather amazing, truth be told. Stepping outside of yourself, and all those sounds. Goodness gracious! This is epic! :) gw
Krutsinger Avatar
January 13, 2021 at 9:04 PM
Thank you so much. I had fun with this one.
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