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I Reinvent Myself

Prancing through midnight mystery, I called my soul to surrender She laughed diabolically Popped and hissed, turning gray Then flashing orange and yellow again Shocked at my daring side, I began to dance, but stopped and crackled In my failure to train myself to relinquish to anyone, I pulled out the big sticks and began to spit and smack Dancing and flashing, hissing and falling into myself. Like a phoenix, my soul refused to be contained. She whirled and twirled, turning herself into flames. I watched in awe, as she began floating upward I reinvent myself one hiss, pop and crackle at a time.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 1/14/2021 9:21:00 AM
Dynamic!Jolts me along! You & I, as friends, now, I say this gave me lots of ?s. Do you mean your soul or your spirit? Whole meaning alters depending. As described your soul seems solid & good, lovely while the spirit is it possibly giving obstinate trouble angst change &spirit like soulcould fly heavenward. ??? ??
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 1/14/2021 10:12:00 AM
My spirit is my soul
Date: 1/13/2021 8:22:00 PM
This is rather amazing, truth be told. Stepping outside of yourself, and all those sounds. Goodness gracious! This is epic! :) gw
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 1/13/2021 9:04:00 PM
Thank you so much. I had fun with this one.

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