I Really Loved

you never lose by loving, if loving gets you learning,
affection filled with attraction, for the quest of satisfaction,
at first touch it's dripping, it's full of nutrients and red glowing,
forming bit by bit like lime water dripping from cave roof for a sharp construction.

you are scared to loose, don't be, that is love rule,
you're in irresistible desire zone, to be irresistibly desired;
looking in the same direction is another you were taught as rule,
its' heavy to hold itself, therefore its has to be admired,

you stood the bitterness trying, and there brilliantly you fall for something, call it a treasure in hide, sure of no invasion,
bitterness shoots up in sense of intrusion, fights back in defending, ready for anything, in the name of love protection.

now you're shaped and fashioned, thanks to our helper love,
before you were mad, agreed! there's always some madness in love,
you made it holy, that which is beautiful that you loved,
now you're hospitalized, for the serious mental damage of love.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Eastman Avatar
August 21, 2013 at 11:22 AM
Sad but interesting.
Reubens Avatar
August 28, 2013 at 5:49 AM
You really think so!!!!!well, this is what we go through as humans and we cannot just assume and sit on them........thank you for the incites
Sibanda Avatar
May 7, 2013 at 1:42 PM
Enjoyed reading your poem.
Reubens Avatar
August 28, 2013 at 5:49 AM
Thank you for the incite..
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