I Quite Like Haikus

I quite like Haikus.
They are short and fun to write.
sometimes...they work out.

There is just something,
not the personality,
but something that works.

Sometimes they become
More than simply ordered lines.
They are poetry.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Fleming Avatar
June 16, 2017 at 7:53 AM
Congrats on your featured poem. Enjoyed!
Maverick Avatar
March 1, 2014 at 1:37 PM
Maximum output with minimum material is how I see it 'revealing more than it shows, pleased to read you today Heather..'
Andresen Avatar
August 11, 2013 at 11:59 AM
"They are short and fun to write."....yes, they are !!! - Well done Heather !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
May Avatar
July 29, 2013 at 5:39 AM
this one worked out quite well Heather...nicely done...thanks for visiting my work
Duncan Avatar
July 8, 2013 at 6:25 PM
love the haiku's ,,,, don't forget the chocolate ;} thank you for coming by my 4 in haiku ;}
A   Avatar
July 6, 2013 at 11:22 PM
awesome...pd
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June 27, 2013 at 4:59 PM
I like them too... I love yours... Terry
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