I Promise By Anna Lo P

..I promise to keep my heart broken, 
for it was you who broke it,
and only you knows how to mend it.

..I promise I will wait for your coming,
and to keep that door open,
because you once knew where you came in.

..I promise to love you again & again,
not so sure until when,
sorry, just me getting a bit insane..xoxo

(all three liners) :(

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 10/13/2012 8:46:00 PM
oh what a beautiful lines!, i can relate this poem to my personal experience!:) I love it anna! thank you for posting this.
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Date: 10/14/2012 4:57:00 AM
thanks for that wonderful comment!..these words truly come from my heart, and all every poems I've written..most of the time we are inspired by sadness & happiness as well.. more poems to be made, happy or sad!.. keep reading..:)
Date: 10/9/2012 11:53:00 PM
all the promises you make are for someone else,make a promise to your self to always make you,you,you very happy,and that begins by loving you,sad write Anna,crying over spill milk
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Date: 10/10/2012 1:15:00 AM
thanks for the comment, and yes I will do myself a promise too!..not crying over spilled milk but rather keeping high hopes on Love.. who knows, in no time Love will find me & will make me happy!.. ..just a phase of grieving i guess..:(
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