I Promise

I promise my self inner peace. What life brings I take. What lies ahead i do not know. I am in no competition, live to become wise, wisdom is light.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Martin Avatar
March 16, 2013 at 2:26 PM
Betty, it sounds as though you have plenty of pain to write about but you're on the right road to success by sharing it with others. (Like those of us here in "PS"). I enjoyed reading this because you've given me a new perspective on life which makes me a little more open to the pain and suffering (and the joys & Happiness) of others. NEVER STOP WRITING! You have plenty of meaningful thoughts to share. Take care, Terry
Njie Avatar
March 23, 2013 at 4:14 AM
am totally out of WORDS thnx so much i didnt expect such a great comment as am just a hobby writer not that perfect poet..... Thnx Terry
Onyango Avatar
March 16, 2013 at 7:00 AM
beautifully said
Njie Avatar
March 23, 2013 at 4:15 AM
thank you moses
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