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I Promise

Whispered promise...Ill keep it with me Always devoted, you control my emotions It stays this way, even as you left left no breath passing sweet lips I called those lips mine, even for this short time Sobs push past false composure breaking down now....she's gone now Frailty in life I'd never realized I couldn't fathom pain til now...suffocating sorrow crushed under the weight of loss In faintest silence I hear your golden laughter as though you sent it in the wind I feel the warmth that was our friendship hairs raise as I sense your presence here Your fragrance wafts through my mind when passing lilac fields The strangest is that of childrens eyes When they smile sincere, it reminds me of your shine Death may seperate our paths... This lifetime wasn't to be ours Wait for me...I'll find you someday This my whispered promise made

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 1/14/2009 8:35:00 AM
The emotion comes through your words in this poem. I like how you ended it. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us. Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 1/13/2009 8:57:00 PM
Very Lovely!!beautifully written...Tyesha
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Date: 1/13/2009 8:46:00 PM
Breathtakingly beautiful. loveudo, Laurie
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