I Pray

I PRAY EVERY DAY, I PRAY EVERY WAY. I PRAY FOR HOPE, I PRAY FOR HEALTH, I PRAY FOR MY WIFE, I PRAY FOR MY LIFE. I PRAY FOR FAMILY, I PRAY FOR FRIENDS, I PRAY FOR THE WORLD, I PRAY FOR MY SOUL. MOST OF ALL... I PRAY TO HEAR GOD, I PRAY TO SEE HIS LIGHT.

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Barbara Barry-Nishanian

Date: 10/4/2019 12:22:00 AM

Very nice. Gen. 2:7 "Man became a living soul" . He wasn't given a soul, man is a living soul, a living person. So you prayed for your life twice. I'm going to go read more of your poems.

L. J. Carber
Date: 10/4/2019 10:28:00 AM

Thank you, Barbara-- actually, I almost lost my life on more than one occasion- but far worse was when I almost lost my soul. And yes, the soul, one's unique being, personality, is endless, eternal, but--as I found out the hard way, a very hard way-- if one forgets God, it can become terribly lost.

Line Gauthier

Date: 5/19/2019 6:19:00 PM

Lovely, LJ. Beautiful.

L. J. Carber
Date: 5/20/2019 9:11:00 AM

Thank you, Line

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 5/19/2019 5:53:00 PM

L.J. there is nothing left to do; this is enough.

L. J. Carber
Date: 5/20/2019 9:11:00 AM

Thank you, Caren