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I Pledged My Love:Collaboration

I longed to speak of love to a woman so fair, but I bumbled and mumbled because I stuttered, so my tongue remained silent. My heart didn't dare whisper, "I love you." Three words never uttered. I tried to be brave but was too timid and shy to gather enough courage to bend on one knee, so I wrote her a poem; hard task for a guy. Reading helps the speech of a stutterer like me. Slowly, I read; each romantic line was uttered. Without a single flaw, I pledged to her my love. Her eyes filled with tears; eyelashes swiftly fluttered. Her arms were the wings of an innocent white dove. "I love you, too," she softly whispered in my ear. Now free of stuttering, I have nothing to fear. September 15, 2020 MAX 14 lines Inspired Prompt Sponsored by: Line Gauthier

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Date: 10/13/2020 8:39:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Sometimes writing is better than talking. A wonderful write. Enjoy your win...................
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Date: 10/12/2020 10:50:00 PM
Good one. 'Reading helps the speech of a stutterer like me' ...haha... Congrats on your win Jenna ~ Ani
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Date: 10/12/2020 10:55:00 AM
such a touching poem Jenna many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/16/2020 1:44:00 AM
Such a lovely sonnet. It will do well in the contest. You have my vote. ~~
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Jenna Logan
Date: 9/16/2020 3:40:00 AM
Good morning, Victor. Your vote pleases me. Thank you very much.
Date: 9/15/2020 10:49:00 PM
An absolutely touching sonnet. It reads like a story. Very very smooth. What an inspiration.!..... Congratulations in advance, dear Jenna
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Jenna Logan
Date: 9/15/2020 11:45:00 PM
Thank you very much for liking these lines, Sigrid.

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