I Pledge To Love You

With this ring I promise

To care and comfort you

Treat you warm and tender 

Go hand in hand life through


Come stormy weather

In gray skies or blue

My home's forever... to be close to you

I pray you’ll love me... as I say I do... 


At the altar I stand... pledging heart to you
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Proxenos Avatar
October 15, 2018 at 11:42 AM
Awesome Arturo. A perfect pledge to love till death do us part. Enjoyed immensely! Kind regards, Jennifer.
Michael Avatar
October 17, 2018 at 10:50 AM
Hi Jennifer...Thank you...you're so kind...All the best to you my friend
De Beaulieu Avatar
September 13, 2018 at 2:41 PM
Hello Micheal, this poem is beautifully written. It sounds like a wedding vow.Have a nice day my friend.
Michael Avatar
October 17, 2018 at 10:49 AM
Hi Darlene...it certainly is a wedding vow...All the best to you my friend...
Lovejoy-Burton Avatar
August 29, 2018 at 5:29 AM
This is pure magic. Very beautiful words to be enunciated loud and clear for the world to hear on your special day, but specifically for the person you love most ...have I missed something over the past few months? Now I have to read every poem - I hate to be behind the 8 ball.
Michael Avatar
August 29, 2018 at 10:51 AM
This was made for a wedding...my first poem for an event...I happening to know the couple so I wrote it with heart
Lovejoy-Burton Avatar
August 29, 2018 at 5:30 AM
perhaps being behind the 8 ball is a good thing...x but I do love this.
Callus Avatar
August 21, 2018 at 12:37 PM
Beautiful and heartfelt words, Arturo. A promise that should last a lifetime! Regards // paul
Michael Avatar
August 26, 2018 at 10:48 AM
Most certainly Paul...I want to wish you a wonderful day...Thanks for being here...All the best to you...
Warrior Avatar
August 20, 2018 at 11:00 PM
I do, I do, I do...lovely write my friend...when's the wedding, Arturo lol...love & marriage...^WW^
Michael Avatar
August 26, 2018 at 10:46 AM
Man, I would be frightened to do it again...Thank you WW...All the best my friend
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 19, 2018 at 11:43 PM
Your poem and video touched my heart and coaxed tears to flow Arturo with exquisite tenderness and love. Bravo my friend! This is going into my faves! : )
Michael Avatar
August 20, 2018 at 12:44 PM
Thank you Connie ~ I believe that's what it takes ~ All the best my friend
Ashley Avatar
August 19, 2018 at 8:31 PM
Oh Arturo, this is so beautifully and tenderly expressive, it moved me to tears. A pledge of love in all its purity, a promise of love spoken from an open, giving and loving heart. A deeply touching poem, mon ami. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Michael Avatar
August 19, 2018 at 9:40 PM
I needed one like this and luckily it came out right...glad you like it...it means a lot to me...all the best my friend...
Krutsinger Avatar
August 19, 2018 at 8:24 PM
I have no idea where you found this video, but it is as poignant and sweet as the poem. What a fantastic start to my readings tonight, Arturo. Thank you!
Michael Avatar
August 19, 2018 at 9:35 PM
By chance I found it...Thanks Caren...
Pandit Avatar
August 19, 2018 at 6:56 AM
A sweet, touching pledge, Arturo.
Michael Avatar
August 19, 2018 at 10:33 AM
Serious business indeed...Thanks for passing by...All the best Vijay
Trifiatis Avatar
August 19, 2018 at 5:17 AM
How tenderly romantic dear friend, Arturo! May you practice it as well...
Michael Avatar
August 19, 2018 at 10:32 AM
I would...Have a nice day D...
Vaso Avatar
August 18, 2018 at 11:46 PM
Very touching, both poem and video
Michael Avatar
August 18, 2018 at 11:55 PM
Hi Arthur... up late my friend...I always wanted to write one of these poems...now I will sleep...All the best...
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