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I Pledge To Love You

With this ring I promise To care and comfort you Treat you warm and tender Go hand in hand life through Come stormy weather In gray skies or blue My home's forever... to be close to you I pray you’ll love me... as I say I do... At the altar I stand... pledging heart to you

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 10/15/2018 11:42:00 AM
Awesome Arturo. A perfect pledge to love till death do us part. Enjoyed immensely! Kind regards, Jennifer.
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Arturo Michael
Date: 10/17/2018 10:50:00 AM
Hi Jennifer...Thank you...you're so kind...All the best to you my friend
Date: 9/13/2018 2:41:00 PM
Hello Micheal, this poem is beautifully written. It sounds like a wedding vow.Have a nice day my friend.
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Arturo Michael
Date: 10/17/2018 10:49:00 AM
Hi Darlene...it certainly is a wedding vow...All the best to you my friend...
Date: 8/29/2018 5:29:00 AM
This is pure magic. Very beautiful words to be enunciated loud and clear for the world to hear on your special day, but specifically for the person you love most ...have I missed something over the past few months? Now I have to read every poem - I hate to be behind the 8 ball.
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Arturo Michael
Date: 8/29/2018 10:51:00 AM
This was made for a wedding...my first poem for an event...I happening to know the couple so I wrote it with heart
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Leanne Lovejoy-Burton
Date: 8/29/2018 5:30:00 AM
perhaps being behind the 8 ball is a good thing...x but I do love this.
Date: 8/21/2018 12:37:00 PM
Beautiful and heartfelt words, Arturo. A promise that should last a lifetime! Regards // paul
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Arturo Michael
Date: 8/26/2018 10:48:00 AM
Most certainly Paul...I want to wish you a wonderful day...Thanks for being here...All the best to you...
Date: 8/20/2018 11:00:00 PM
I do, I do, I do...lovely write my friend...when's the wedding, Arturo lol...love & marriage...^WW^
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Arturo Michael
Date: 8/26/2018 10:46:00 AM
Man, I would be frightened to do it again...Thank you WW...All the best my friend
Date: 8/19/2018 11:43:00 PM
Your poem and video touched my heart and coaxed tears to flow Arturo with exquisite tenderness and love. Bravo my friend! This is going into my faves! : )
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Arturo Michael
Date: 8/20/2018 12:44:00 PM
Thank you Connie ~ I believe that's what it takes ~ All the best my friend
Date: 8/19/2018 8:31:00 PM
Oh Arturo, this is so beautifully and tenderly expressive, it moved me to tears. A pledge of love in all its purity, a promise of love spoken from an open, giving and loving heart. A deeply touching poem, mon ami. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
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Arturo Michael
Date: 8/19/2018 9:40:00 PM
I needed one like this and luckily it came out right...glad you like it...it means a lot to me...all the best my friend...
Date: 8/19/2018 8:24:00 PM
I have no idea where you found this video, but it is as poignant and sweet as the poem. What a fantastic start to my readings tonight, Arturo. Thank you!
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Arturo Michael
Date: 8/19/2018 9:35:00 PM
By chance I found it...Thanks Caren...
Date: 8/19/2018 6:56:00 AM
A sweet, touching pledge, Arturo.
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Arturo Michael
Date: 8/19/2018 10:33:00 AM
Serious business indeed...Thanks for passing by...All the best Vijay
Date: 8/19/2018 5:17:00 AM
How tenderly romantic dear friend, Arturo! May you practice it as well...
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Arturo Michael
Date: 8/19/2018 10:32:00 AM
I would...Have a nice day D...
Date: 8/18/2018 11:46:00 PM
Very touching, both poem and video
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Arturo Michael
Date: 8/18/2018 11:55:00 PM
Hi Arthur... up late my friend...I always wanted to write one of these poems...now I will sleep...All the best...

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