I Picked a Rose

In a lovely place paradisiacal, where the softest showers bring blooms that open up their petals and then begin to sing and shimmer in synchronization, with undulating hues, vocalizing for their Maker their sweet melodious tunes. . . . is where I saw you first, fair flower- among that radiant cluster, echoing your praise with all the fervor you could muster. You resided in a spot, slightly shaded. .. .on the border, where ornamental shrubbery lent an immaculate order. Not amidst the pansies or the other annual flowers that glimmer for their time but need rest at pre-set hours.. . but there with the stalwart bushes, unobtrusive in your pose - A simple classic beauty; for my guide, I picked a rose. (For my mother, who is a very spiritual, faithful and modest woman and a very immaculate housekeeper as well! This poem imagines that we might select our parents before we are born! by the way, my mom turned 90 this past March 23rd!) For A Mother's Love, Tributes Of Love For Mother's Day Poetry Contest Sponsor: BJ Legros Kelley
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Seeker Avatar
May 4, 2022 at 2:33 AM
Absolutely amazing and mind blowing, Andrea! Congrats on your win
Legros Kelley Avatar
May 3, 2022 at 8:06 PM
Andrea, this is so incredibly beautiful! What an amazing and precious poem of absolute love for your precious mother. Thank you for submitting this poem, God bless you my friend! Congratulations!
Shines Avatar
March 26, 2014 at 9:21 AM
congratulations !! beautiful poem
Watson Avatar
March 24, 2014 at 11:15 AM
If you did choose your mum before coming to earth, You obviously chose well . Delightful Andrea, Deserving of the highest possible praise.
Green Avatar
March 21, 2014 at 7:45 PM
This just blows me away, congrats on your placement.
Sirak Avatar
March 21, 2014 at 7:20 AM
A beautiful tribute! Congrats on your win.
Mehta Avatar
March 20, 2014 at 5:35 AM
Lovely and heartfelt poem on mommy. Congrats on the fine win, andrea
Marcum Wong Avatar
March 19, 2014 at 7:15 PM
This is one of your best and I see it is number one with Leonora too. Congrats on your BIG win Andie. Congrats on your other wins too. Too many for me to get to in my limited time on the computer. hugs, C
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March 19, 2014 at 5:27 PM
Andrea, A tender loving win... :) Congratulations, with your winning poem, --A very touching topic, sponsored by the Awesome and Sweet Leonora-- Sending hugs ~LINDA
May Avatar
March 19, 2014 at 4:18 PM
Beautiful tribute to your Mom Andrea..Congrats on your win...
Callus Avatar
March 19, 2014 at 1:33 PM
Hi Andrea! Congrats on your win. beautiful heartfelt poem you wrote here... your mum merits a rose...and more. I love the ease with which you expressed yourself. cu // paul
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March 19, 2014 at 1:32 PM
- A beautiful winning poem, Andrea !!! - / / - CONGRATULATIONS WITH YOUR FIRST PLACE -//- oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Smith Avatar
March 19, 2014 at 1:17 PM
This is wonderful Andrea. Congrats on the win
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March 19, 2014 at 11:41 AM
Well penned Andrea... Congratulations on the win... Verlena
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March 19, 2014 at 11:35 AM
I thought you were a rhymer and sonneteer, Hmmmm...Good stuff my friend! Congratulations are in order here - Tim
Torres Avatar
March 19, 2014 at 11:28 AM
Congratulations Andrea!! ..^_^.. a very lovely poem for your mom.. ;')) oxoxox
Gasun Avatar
March 19, 2014 at 10:40 AM
This is a great poem for your mom my very dear friend Andrea. Congratulations! Thank you so much for sharing and your loving support in my contest! love lots and biggest hugs, Leonora
Oyewole Avatar
May 18, 2013 at 9:57 AM
Unique quill and tribute to your mom. Very lovely. Congrats on your win. AO
Richards Avatar
May 17, 2013 at 8:41 AM
I'll never understand why some poems end up on the bottom of a list, when they should be number 1. This is one
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May 17, 2013 at 7:38 AM
I think you will have to give God credit for that one, after all he knows you better than you know yourself. I enjoyed your poem Andrea.
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May 16, 2013 at 10:13 PM
CONGRATULATIONS, ANDREA! Thank you for the nice and wonderful heartfelt poem about mom's. ~LOVE~ Linda
Brown Avatar
May 17, 2012 at 2:27 PM
Congratulations on your placement in P.D.'s "Any Dedication" contest Andrea. Love, Carol
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May 17, 2012 at 12:41 PM
Very descriptive, expressive and emotive work that you have penned..Enjoyed reading this winning work..Congrats..Sara
Taylor Avatar
May 16, 2012 at 2:40 PM
Congrats on your well deserved win, Andrea. Brilliant piece. Great job, my friend. Kudos. hugs, Ralph
May Avatar
May 16, 2012 at 5:47 AM
congrats on your win Andrea
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