I Persist

I have become so weak now, 
that the only strength I stand with,
is the strength of my attachment.
The attachment of my improbable love.

I now know, how I could not return, 
from the depth of immense rain,
of love so deep.
So hard to deceive.

My heart still awakens, 
in the light of hope,
of dreams so true,
memories revoke.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Agustin Avatar
September 16, 2024 at 5:42 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Pratim Avatar
September 16, 2024 at 12:16 PM
Thanks that means a lot:)
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