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I Passed By

Beat up old Ford, along the freeway, rear end jacked, flat tire is off, the trunk is open and the dentritus of a life exposed. Clothes, empty brake fluid cans, children's toys, a paper back book, loose pages dancing in the traffic, flat spare tire and tools left lying impotent in a frozen moment.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2007




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Date: 9/18/2010 5:21:00 PM
Hello, Ahellas here I am stopping by to say hi and CONGRATULATIONS! What a delightful poem. Had fun reading your featured poem of the week. Take care,.. p.d.
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Date: 9/18/2010 8:48:00 AM
congratulations on the well written piece and on being featured this week. very enjoyable read ... thanks, chuck
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Date: 9/14/2010 8:17:00 AM
Ah, the price of negligence. This could happen to anyone, especially me. Congrats on the selection. Love, Dave
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Date: 9/13/2010 12:36:00 PM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week here at PoetrySoupAhellas . Love, Carol
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