Anonomus Scorpio Poet Monorhyme

I pardon no one

Within this ink is a taste so bitter
Warn you though I am no quitter
I don't follow fake pomp and glitter
Find within me a devotion emitter
The crosses your bearing, I was for her there log splitter
Replacing their pain, I added sweetness to the bitter
I've written the code of how to be a committer
If you intend to challenge my devotion, those eyes must see you commit to her!
I'll carve you out if you show up to be a transmitter!
That feeling within you; Dads are "far more than just a jitter"
For if hell has a place on Earth; it will not be with me as it's remitter

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Panagiota Romios April 29, 2024 at 8:18 AM Golly l Antonio this is a masterpiece . One of the top 10 faviorites, now you are one of them..!of mine here at the Soup! You are the 100 per cent man and your poem is indicative of that. Finding a man or woman with integrity, thats williing to commit, is not easy…last three lines,,,wow.. such power,. Wishing you love, Pangie xx Panagiota Romios April 29, 2024 at 12:50 PM Hey, sorry for my spelling error s earlier…. So embarassed! Pangie xx Anonomus Scorpio April 29, 2024 at 12:25 PM Thank you very much Pangie, not often that I blush but I most definitely am right now. I appreciate your kindness and your loving heart as well. Your friendship is truly a gift! Warmly A.S.

Paige Hind April 26, 2024 at 5:56 PM You wrote this with a lot of sensitivity. I believe in you, my dear friend... Anonomus Scorpio April 27, 2024 at 6:25 AM Fatherly devotion requires a sensitive approach. I appritiate the faith you give! A.S.