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I painted us perfect

I painted us perfect, love's untarnished gleam, but your control chipped away at the heart of my dream. Five years, a gilded cage where freedom slipped away, now your betrayal's echo darkens every day. His whispers poisoned trust, his games left me confined, wounds deep and lingering, a love redefined.

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Date: 10/4/2024 11:10:00 AM
If it was perfect then love would not be a second hand emotion.. right? I feel your words... heartache is a difficult sensation
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