James Inman Poet Fibonacci

I Owe You

I
owe
you my
everything.
Your perpetual
love leaves me bathed in your warm glow
and brightens my deepest, darkest moments with the light
of your omniscient presence bleeding bright azure beauty into my indigo soul.


02/24/16

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Poet Destroyer A March 8, 2016 at 3:03 PM Love the win...Linda James Inman March 10, 2016 at 9:23 AM Thanks so much, PD.

Len Gasun March 7, 2016 at 11:35 AM Congratulations as well on your win my dear friend, James! This is soo beautiful. I love it! love lots and big hug, Leonora James Inman March 10, 2016 at 9:24 AM Thank you for the wonderful comment Leonora.

Hansteven Selfa March 6, 2016 at 1:57 AM A must read poem james! You deserve the win! Congratulations! :) -HANS James Inman March 7, 2016 at 10:20 AM Thank you Hans.

Eve Roper March 2, 2016 at 9:51 PM James, congratulations on your win! James Inman March 3, 2016 at 8:09 AM Hi Eve, thanks.

Constance La France March 2, 2016 at 12:52 PM James, this is beautifully done, a lovely poem, and I am loving it 7, mine for the contest is called Enduring Love, but sadly I forgot to enter it ~ Constance La France March 2, 2016 at 4:26 PM Thank you James for visiting my poem... yes, I think it would have placed well James Inman March 2, 2016 at 1:57 PM Just read yours, it would have done well in the contest.

Richard Lamoureux March 2, 2016 at 10:51 AM I really enjoyed your winning piece. James Inman March 2, 2016 at 10:57 AM Thanks for the kind words Richard.

Sandra Haight March 2, 2016 at 8:16 AM Beautifully done, James. Congratulations on your fine win. Sandra James Inman March 2, 2016 at 10:01 AM Thanks for the kindness Sandra.

Carlene Simpson March 2, 2016 at 12:27 AM Good write James....Congrats on your placement in the contest James Inman March 2, 2016 at 8:11 AM Thank you for the nice words, Carlene.

Beautiful Scars March 1, 2016 at 7:47 PM James, Congrats on your placement in the contest! -luloo *smiles* James Inman March 2, 2016 at 8:12 AM Thank you Laura.

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores March 1, 2016 at 6:32 PM Congratulations on the placement of the contest James James Inman March 2, 2016 at 8:13 AM Nayda, a wonderful contest. I love the form. Thank you so much for hosting it.

CayCay Godwin February 24, 2016 at 12:15 PM I love this, James - the impact is strong and lovely ... CayCay James Inman February 24, 2016 at 12:32 PM Thank you CayCay, the form is interesting to write in. It's almost like stating an idea in the first few lines and expounding on that idea in the rest of the poem. The first lines set the tone of the poem.