I Owe You

I owe you my everything. Your perpetual love leaves me bathed in your warm glow and brightens my deepest, darkest moments with the light of your omniscient presence bleeding bright azure beauty into my indigo soul. 02/24/16

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/8/2016 3:03:00 PM

Love the win...Linda

James Inman
Date: 3/10/2016 9:23:00 AM

Thanks so much, PD.

Len Gasun

Date: 3/7/2016 11:35:00 AM

Congratulations as well on your win my dear friend, James! This is soo beautiful. I love it! love lots and big hug, Leonora

James Inman
Date: 3/10/2016 9:24:00 AM

Thank you for the wonderful comment Leonora.

Hansteven Selfa

Date: 3/6/2016 1:57:00 AM

A must read poem james! You deserve the win! Congratulations! :) -HANS

James Inman
Date: 3/7/2016 10:20:00 AM

Thank you Hans.

Eve Roper

Date: 3/2/2016 9:51:00 PM

James, congratulations on your win!

James Inman
Date: 3/3/2016 8:09:00 AM

Hi Eve, thanks.

Constance La France

Date: 3/2/2016 12:52:00 PM

James, this is beautifully done, a lovely poem, and I am loving it 7, mine for the contest is called Enduring Love, but sadly I forgot to enter it ~

Constance La France
Date: 3/2/2016 4:26:00 PM

Thank you James for visiting my poem... yes, I think it would have placed well

James Inman
Date: 3/2/2016 1:57:00 PM

Just read yours, it would have done well in the contest.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/2/2016 10:51:00 AM

I really enjoyed your winning piece.

James Inman
Date: 3/2/2016 10:57:00 AM

Thanks for the kind words Richard.

Sandra Haight

Date: 3/2/2016 8:16:00 AM

Beautifully done, James. Congratulations on your fine win. Sandra

James Inman
Date: 3/2/2016 10:01:00 AM

Thanks for the kindness Sandra.

Carlene Simpson

Date: 3/2/2016 12:27:00 AM

Good write James....Congrats on your placement in the contest

James Inman
Date: 3/2/2016 8:11:00 AM

Thank you for the nice words, Carlene.

Lu Loo

Date: 3/1/2016 7:47:00 PM

James, Congrats on your placement in the contest! -luloo *smiles*

James Inman
Date: 3/2/2016 8:12:00 AM

Thank you Laura.

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

Date: 3/1/2016 6:32:00 PM

Congratulations on the placement of the contest James

James Inman
Date: 3/2/2016 8:13:00 AM

Nayda, a wonderful contest. I love the form. Thank you so much for hosting it.

Caycay Jennings

Date: 2/24/2016 12:15:00 PM

I love this, James - the impact is strong and lovely ... CayCay

James Inman
Date: 2/24/2016 12:32:00 PM

Thank you CayCay, the form is interesting to write in. It's almost like stating an idea in the first few lines and expounding on that idea in the rest of the poem. The first lines set the tone of the poem.