Heidi Sands Poet Terzanelle

I Open the Door

I open the door, where I am free
Fresh air moves me, as if I have wings
I float with dreams, nature carries me

To all the places where my heart sings
I stare at all the movement around
Fresh air moves me, as if I have wings

I listen to the music of sound
Peace is everwhere, to surround
I stare at all the movement around

Grateful for anything that I've found
This chance to experience it all
Peace is everywhere to surround

My creation provides me no wall
So, I fly in my mind through it all
This chance to experience it all

Because, time moves on, with all to see
I open the door where I am free
Looking at all the trees that stand tall
I float with dreams, nature carries me

Heidi Sands

4/2/20

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Demetrios Trifiatis April 3, 2020 at 7:09 AM Powerful poem filled with optimism and determination dearest Heidi. Hugs xxx Hope you are well and take care of yourself. Heidi Sands April 3, 2020 at 12:06 PM Thank you so much Demetrios. I am ok and I also hope you are well. Take care. ! Hugs :)

Vijay Pandit April 3, 2020 at 6:44 AM You always write beautifully in this form--excellent tone and feel--I enjoyed the read, Heidi. Heidi Sands April 3, 2020 at 12:05 PM Hi Vijay. I now think of you, when I write them, because you have given me such positive feedback on them. Thank you very much. I hope you are well. Have a nice day :)

Jenish Somadas April 3, 2020 at 12:50 AM Wonderful write Heidi.. Terzanelle.. I villainelle once.. But never this form.. Great soothing write.. Heidi Sands April 3, 2020 at 1:48 AM It would be nice for you to try it. I am happy yo hear it is soothing. Thank you. Take care :)

Gershon Wolf April 2, 2020 at 10:01 PM Lighter than air --- in the face of the world's heavy cares. Keep your spirits buoyant, my friend! :) gw Heidi Sands April 3, 2020 at 1:45 AM Thank you Gershon. I will try :)

Connie Marcum Wong April 2, 2020 at 8:41 PM Nature makes my heart sing too Heidi. Enjoy this lovely spring as we have time at home. I enjoyed this breath of fresh air you have shared. Mahalo and stay safe my friend, xxoo Heidi Sands April 3, 2020 at 1:45 AM Thank you very much Connie. Enjoy :)