I Once Was Lost

Safe in Fathers arms
Rescued from danger, secure
Back in the fold, home.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Higgins Avatar
April 1, 2009 at 5:10 AM
This is a wonderful Haiku..love the first line a lot.
Gorelick Avatar
March 31, 2009 at 8:54 PM
I found this so comforting..good work. I think it might be considered a senryu.
Chircop Avatar
March 31, 2009 at 4:43 PM
nice haiku
Neal Avatar
March 31, 2009 at 4:30 PM
Beautiful message, you are writing your heart out. Love Elizabeth
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