I Once Was a Painter

I have walked past the mirror so many times,
God, I cannot believe what I see.
I once was a painter of great songs and rhymes,
Brushing rainbows and drinking muse tea.
I sang to the hearts of the rich and the poor.
"He's a genius, a prophet," they said.
I walked upon water and danced with pride's whore.
Now, the poet and song man are dead.

It no longer rains and the sun does not shine.
The great spectrum of colors is gone.
All my brushes are silent, the bristles resign,
To a world with no sunset or dawn.
The people no longer pay heed to a man,
Who is just one more face in the crowd. 
I wonder if this was God's ultimate plan,
So that I would no longer be proud.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Bangalee Avatar
September 11, 2021 at 9:56 PM
Excellent and really beautiful poem shared
Carrillo Avatar
June 27, 2014 at 11:19 PM
This is a beautiful poem. It makes a lot of sense. God does have a plan for us. Thanks for sharing... Lucilla
Nehls Avatar
June 28, 2014 at 8:09 PM
Thanks, Lucilla. Happy you liked this one. God certainly does have a plan for us.... Robert.
Gibson Avatar
June 27, 2014 at 2:19 PM
This is so good....made me want to put my head down and cry. Glad you are not really that man or I would not be reading your beautiful poetry.
Nehls Avatar
June 27, 2014 at 6:54 PM
Thank you so much for saying I write beautiful poetry. Those are such sweet words. I always enjoy your visit.... Robert.
Thompson Avatar
June 23, 2014 at 10:44 PM
Robert, this is a wonderful piece, and I enjoyed reading it. Hope to read more of your work soon. Welcome to the Soup, and take care. Jess
Nehls Avatar
June 24, 2014 at 11:20 AM
Thank you, Jessica. You are very kind and I will read some of you poetry soon.... Robert.
Dietrich Avatar
June 23, 2014 at 3:44 PM
so lovely what you said about the feather of my poem being a quill. let me read this poem of yours now.....this reminds me of that saying: pride goeth before the fall. Did I get that right? WHAT An awesome poem about that topic!! The lesson learned is very well described.
Nehls Avatar
June 24, 2014 at 11:19 AM
You got it right, my fine friend. It has destroyed many a talented soul. Thanks for your great comments. I always enjoy hearing from you...... Robert.
Halliday Avatar
June 23, 2014 at 3:41 PM
Beautiful word-imagery in this one. Particularly like the 3rd and 4th lines.
Nehls Avatar
June 24, 2014 at 11:14 AM
Thank you, Mark. Very kind.... Robert.
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June 23, 2014 at 7:04 AM
Dear Robert, please send me some of that "muse tea." Inspiration comes and goes for many of us, but you certainly have talent. Your gifted "brush" is evident in this poem. ((Hope you'll consider writing for my Past Lives contest. This poem sounds like the premise of an entry!) Love and blessings, Carolyn
Nehls Avatar
June 24, 2014 at 11:13 AM
You humble me my talented friend. Muse tea is a very complicated matter, but I can tell you, it is mostly water. I did enter the contest with another poem that was inspired by the contest. Thanks for all you comments.... Robert.
Clark Avatar
June 23, 2014 at 6:23 AM
If this is an example of your "bristles resign", they have resigned in grand style and with great flare! What a marvelous write, Robert! I don't know how to "break" this to you ... but ... You are STILL a Master Painter! Thoroughly enjoyed this. Jack C
Nehls Avatar
June 24, 2014 at 11:07 AM
Thanks so much, Jack. Very kind words my friend...... Robert.
Smith Avatar
June 23, 2014 at 4:58 AM
Wow! Wow! Wow! Robert, this seems perfect for the past life contest.. My understanding of what I have read of reincarnation is that one would be born again and again till they have learned all life's lessons.. Please excuse one last Wow!.. Hugs my friend.. Arlene
Nehls Avatar
June 24, 2014 at 11:02 AM
Arlene, I'm so happy you liked this one. I really appreciate all the wows. That is my understanding of reincarnation also. Talk to you soon my dear.... Robert.
Kendrick Avatar
June 23, 2014 at 4:51 AM
Enjoyed reading this one..Thanks for the visit to my page..I am glad that you have gotten your muse and inspiration back so that we can enjoy your work..Thanks for the visit ...Sara
Nehls Avatar
June 24, 2014 at 10:58 AM
Thank you, Sara. So nice to hear from you and thanks for the kind words.... Robert.
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June 23, 2014 at 3:27 AM
- A deep and touching poem .... about time that was happy. - But you can be proud of your poems. - Thanks for visiting nice visit on my last poem. - Have a enjoyable day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Nehls Avatar
June 24, 2014 at 10:56 AM
Thanks so much, Anne Lise. Always nice to have you stop by. I appreciate your comment.... Robert
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