I Notice When Shes Gone
even when shes here but gone
i notice the actions of her act
beauty charms the barks
see the simple of her ignorance
Fingers swish the black back
and step LIGHTLY lightly
you smell beautifully underscore
gentle is her force
surrender to a look
Delicate lingers
I notice
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