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I Never Needed a Dad

Hey Dad, Look at me. Am i what you expected? Here I am, living life The way you always rejected. At peace with myself, with my head in the sky.. My love on the shelf, And I never said bye.. But that's fine, Cause guess what? You left me first, dad. And now you've been cut, Don't you dare think you're sad. Cause i can swear before God you hurt me and mom more. So take your pain, and your hurt, and walk out the front door. AGAIN.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/4/2010 4:46:00 PM
what you never had, you will give back to your own, more often with more fun. good luck to you, keep writing. hard feeling expressed, thank you for sharing, chuck
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Date: 10/4/2010 10:49:00 AM
From what I am reading this morning it looks as if everyone found some inspiration to write this weekend. Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry with us today Austin. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/3/2010 10:45:00 PM
a strong write, from a strong poet, writting is how we express and you did so well, enjoyed your write..P.D.
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Date: 10/3/2010 9:32:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed your poetry tonight.. hope u check oout the contest scene to enter and good luck with luv..
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Date: 10/3/2010 7:35:00 PM
deep subject that too many of us understand, well written
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