I Never Needed a Dad

Hey Dad, Look at me.
Am i what you expected?
Here I am, living life
The way you always rejected.

At peace with myself,
with my head in the sky..
My love on the shelf,
And I never said bye..

But that's fine, Cause guess what?
You left me first, dad.
And now you've been cut,
Don't you dare think you're sad.

Cause i can swear before God
you hurt me and mom more.
So take your pain, and your hurt,
and walk out the front door.
AGAIN.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Keys Avatar
October 4, 2010 at 4:46 PM
what you never had, you will give back to your own, more often with more fun. good luck to you, keep writing. hard feeling expressed, thank you for sharing, chuck
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October 4, 2010 at 10:49 AM
From what I am reading this morning it looks as if everyone found some inspiration to write this weekend. Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry with us today Austin. Love, Carol
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October 3, 2010 at 10:45 PM
a strong write, from a strong poet, writting is how we express and you did so well, enjoyed your write..P.D.
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October 3, 2010 at 9:32 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed your poetry tonight.. hope u check oout the contest scene to enter and good luck with luv..
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October 3, 2010 at 7:35 PM
deep subject that too many of us understand, well written
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