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I Never Learned

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For Poem of Your Heart Poetry Contest sponsored by Ink Empress

I never learned how to sing. I only knew how to bark. In the morning, while it's still dark, the best song ever heard is sung by a button-brained bird. Yet, I haven't learned anything. I never learned how to sing. I never learned how to dance. I stood by the door on the side, trying my best to just to hide, while your spirit flew with each twirl, a joyful and graceful girl. It's not that I hadn't the chance, yet I never learned how to dance. I never learned how to give. Like a Santa Claus Christmas elf, you worked hard, never thought of yourself - and you gave me your samples, providing many examples. So how could you ever forgive that I never learned how to give? Tonight, it seems I will die. and while, soon, I'll be dead, the lesson book before me unread, is written in beauty and grace, in each line on your face. Dear, was I too late to try, tonight, as it seems I must die?

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Date: 10/23/2024 12:19:00 PM
Nicely done David... This his is a deeply introspective poem that examines the weight of missed chances and the sorrow of recognizing them too late. Its simplicity in language and structure allows the emotional depth to shine through, making it a powerful meditation on the importance of engaging with life and those around us before it’s too late.
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