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To my Poetry Soup friends - this was written as a thank you note for all of your beautiful, uplifting gifts of poetry and comments. Your words can mean the difference between a dark day and a light day ~ thank you all The walls were closing in last night my covers felt like straitjackets the darkness crushing fragile hope I needed wings to soar away. I rose to find your poem here it spoke of dreams and butterflies, of wind and whispers filling sails - my soul rose with the sun. A dreaded phone call. Plans today are torn asunder, raining grief, the colors I once knew are black - I need new eyes to see again. You write of sorrow, yet your tone is one of dawn and singing birds and spring's growth resurrecting hope - my faith in God restored. An empty home awaits me now the air is flat. No tune is sung to open windows of the heart and let the summer sing its song. You write of sunsets in their poise while kissing the horizon slow I read this and my wounds are healed- your poem gives me wings. Your words inspire, this much I know they open curtains, let in sun, bring music to the quiet space they speak of faith in things unseen. You turn my thoughts from dying leaves to robins singing from their nests - I thank you, friend, for all your words, I needed wings today. Written 1 April 2022

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Ink Empress

Date: 1/26/2024 8:43:00 PM

This is so heartfelt and so sincere. I absolutely loved the flow of your word weaving and how you’ve phrased your thoughts in such a moving manner so soulful and poetic. Especially loved “ You turn my thoughts from dying leaves to robins singing from their nests -“ what a way to describe how much you appreciate others. I see why this is a top poem. Congratulations and well deserved . It is my pleasure reading this too

Michael Tor

Date: 7/4/2022 11:18:00 PM

Love this Poem John. We all need to be lifted up from this world at times. Reading a special poem that touches you inside and lifts your spirits is a welcomed remedy. The theme is one that many of us need. Also a big Congratulations on being selected on The New Best Poem List. Thanks for Posting and may the good Lord continue blessing you...

John Watt
Date: 7/5/2022 10:38:00 PM

Thank you, Michael. I think all of us at this site understand the power of a well-written poem that touches the soul; that's why we keep coming back. Blessings to you ~ John

Paghunda Zahid

Date: 5/10/2022 11:34:00 AM

Congratulations

John Watt
Date: 7/5/2022 10:37:00 PM

Thank you, Paghunda

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/23/2022 11:19:00 AM

did I tell you congrats on the trophy win too. I was amazed to see one for myself as well this morning. Keep up the excellent work,John and please let me know if I ever missed any works of yours. Just can't find any of yours I have not read!!

John Watt
Date: 7/5/2022 10:37:00 PM

I appreciate you, Andrea!

Andrew John

Date: 4/23/2022 2:21:00 AM

Words inspire, indeed. Thank you, J.

John Watt
Date: 7/5/2022 10:36:00 PM

Grateful for your visit and comment, Andrew

John Watt

Date: 4/22/2022 11:20:00 PM

Thank you Krish for your heartwarming and enthusiastic encouragement. To be fair to the other POTD writers, this one did not receive a POTD, but your kind affirmation is worth every bit as much to me. I am grateful. Blessings ~ John

Krish Radhakrishna

Date: 4/22/2022 11:15:00 PM

John Brilliant write! Your poetry always has a beautiful flow and this one is excellent in its content and rhythm!! Well done on POTD!! I love this poem!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/22/2022 4:25:00 PM

wow, you are at top of the best new poems list with this one. Congrats, my friend.

John Watt
Date: 4/22/2022 10:40:00 PM

Thank you for being alongside me on this wonderful ride, ever since I arrived. You have mentored and encouraged more than you can know, my friend.

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 4/22/2022 4:08:00 PM

Dear John, revisiting to congratulate you for the top position in the best new poems list. This emotionally rich poem, which is created by your gifted pen deserves all the honour. You are a talented, gifted, creative soul with uplifting, positive messages - you are an inspiration to many of us. Yes, you are right - poetry has a healing power, and we are fortunate to experience that enriching gift. Love and blessings ~ Mala

John Watt
Date: 4/22/2022 10:39:00 PM

Mala, so kind of you to point out this surprising and humbling news. You are generous to say that I am an inspiration... that inspiration is a two-way street and I hope my fellow poets are aware they are the ones who inspired these words of gratitude. Thank you for your poetry friendship. God bless you ~ John

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/21/2022 1:22:00 PM

I came back to congratulate you on your Trophy John. This lovely poem is so deserving. I faved this and hope to see it at the top of the best new poems list. Blessings xxoo

John Watt
Date: 4/21/2022 9:23:00 PM

Connie, you've been very generous to visit this one and comment three times, and to grace it with a fav... thank you for the repeat blessing.

Susan Ashley

Date: 4/20/2022 7:47:00 AM

Oh my dear PoBro! Magnificence spills from your gifted and expressive pen. Like the phoenix, it is miraculous to rise from the depths of emotional pain and find, in the heights of our heart's rebirth, the beauty of Nature's life and Her wonders amongst the sullen ashes. Indeed the power of friendship and poetry feeds the glory of the phoenix. The ability to inspire and to be inspired, is a band of gold between poets, a circle of perfection never ending with the promise of uplifting creativity and the gift of comfort. Please accept my belated congratulations for both POTD honors and for your excellent trophy win with this metaphorically beautiful piece of finding the sunlight of gratitude in the midst of darkness.. both honors so richly deserved. You are a potent poetic force, John, and your friendship to me is a fount of joy. Thank you for sharing the gift of your poetry. Warmest wishes and hugs.. your PS-PS

John Watt
Date: 4/21/2022 12:44:00 AM

My dear and wonderful PS-PS, the depth and breadth of your affirmation and encouragement always astound me! I am spilling over with gratitude to be held in your high esteem when your golden pen and poetic friendship are so admired. I am humbled to be embraced within your circle of friends and deeply value your kind and generous input on my ramblings and rumblings. Your phoenix allusion is so on point, for we do need to sometimes rise from the ashes of setbacks, loss, and grief, and it is friends such as yourself that send those wings soaring. Warmest wishes and deepest blessings to you ~ your PoBro

Susan Lawrence

Date: 4/15/2022 11:20:00 AM

John, I am just now reading this beautiful evocative rendering of your heart and soul and pain and rebirth. Thank you for your gratitude and raw expression of darkness to light . You have a gift my friend . Your thoughts unveiling so much emotion . Big congratulations on your win ! So deserving . A fav for me to read many times . Hugs and blessings, Susan :)

John Watt
Date: 4/21/2022 9:37:00 AM

Susan, as an artist, I know you comprehend and deeply experience the medicinal and restorative power of art. The dark days will come into each life, and in our pain, we turn to that which heals and comforts. For many of us it is reading and/or writing the words that connect one soul to another. Some days it is fine art, some days music, maybe literature/film/dance/theater, sometimes just re-reading a letter from a loved one. Thank you for being one of those healing forces. I appreciate the fave and the time you spend joining me on the journey. Blessings and hugs ~ John

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 4/15/2022 9:36:00 AM

Dear John, I am sorry for being late expressing my feelings to read this magnificent poem, and also congratulating you for POTD and the trophy. "I needed wings today" - how touching these words are! You are a mentor, a friend, an inspiration to everyone at this site - you have made us believe in the power of poetry. This poem is definitely going to my faves, to read many times. Love and blessings ~ Mala

John Watt
Date: 4/21/2022 9:27:00 AM

Dear Mala, no comment is ever too late, for each one is a gift, and the timing is always just right. I am so grateful for your poetry friendship, your inspiring and creative poetic gifts, and your encouragement to your fellow poets, myself included. Yes, let us all believe in the power of poetry; the power to heal, support, educate, and inspire. Each one of us is a gift to each other and to the world around us. Thank you dearly for the fave and the time you take to bring a blessing. Warmest wishes ~ John

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 4/14/2022 11:40:00 PM

I am so thrilled to see you take first place with your magnificent poem, John, there is so much exquisite beauty in this, you have more than earned your trophy! (and please forgive the lateness of my reply)

John Watt
Date: 4/21/2022 12:57:00 AM

My artistry sib, thank you for being one of the sources of inspiration that set this one in motion... there is no need for forgiveness, for the gift of a comment is always on time. As this is your second comment here, I am doubly blessed and doubly grateful. Thank you for the very uplifting words; your affirmation always carries a lot of weight with me.

Anne E Sangster - K

Date: 4/13/2022 2:37:00 PM

A wonderful tribute John. There are days too when I need wings to help lift my spirits, and reading the happy, inspirational poems here by my fellow Soupers helps me feel so much better. Cheers Anne :-)

John Watt
Date: 4/21/2022 12:52:00 AM

I so agree with all you wrote here, Anne. Thank you for being part of the Soup and for taking time to read and comment. Some days a poem or comment are just what I need to wash away the dust of the day. Cheers, John

Brandy Nicole

Date: 4/12/2022 7:39:00 PM

This is beautiful, uplifting and inspiring, all at the same time. These few words curl around the entire poem, bringing it to life. "I needed wings today." It is wonderful knowing that a friend is close by, that words can lift the heart and bring a smile. This is such a lovely tribute. I'm drifting in your words, my dear friend. Congratulations on your win. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

John Watt
Date: 4/21/2022 12:51:00 AM

Yes Brandy, it is wonderful knowing that a friend is close by. This site has many dear people who not only share a common love for poetry, but who also care about the person behind the writing. You are one such friend. Thank you for your endearing words. Hugs ~ John

Alexis Y.

Date: 4/12/2022 7:10:00 PM

WoW! John, You have composed such a well-written, inspirational, encouraging, and uplifting write. I have been there too, I have read a poem, and it gave me wings. Your poems(such as this) often do wonders to my spirit. Excellent job. Congratulations on your top win and for the poem of the day. Have a nice day:-) Alexis

John Watt
Date: 4/21/2022 12:48:00 AM

Dear Alexis, it delights me that you are able to relate to the experiences I have shared. Thank you for your sweet comment and congrats. To be fair to the potd winners, this one was not potd, but your affirmation is worth every bit as much. Blessings ~ John

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/11/2022 8:14:00 AM

Congratulations, John. A marvelous win!

John Watt
Date: 4/11/2022 11:26:00 AM

Thank you always, Andrea, your encouragement means so much to me! You are a poet who has lifted my spirits countless times. Enjoy your week ~ John

Gary Radice

Date: 4/11/2022 6:43:00 AM

Yes, all that's been said John: this is a wonderful poem about the power of poetry. Congratulations on POTD. Cheers - Gary

Gary Radice
Date: 4/12/2022 12:47:00 PM

It was worthy of POTD in my book :) Cheers - Gary

John Watt
Date: 4/11/2022 11:25:00 AM

Gary, I value your opinion deeply and am moved by your favorable opinion of this. You are kind to promote it to POTD, but your esteem is worth just as much to me. Hope you are enjoying your Monday ~ John

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 4/11/2022 5:29:00 AM

Oh, wow. I just love love love this! It's such a brilliant and moving write. I am faving. God bless you always. Love, Gina

John Watt
Date: 4/11/2022 11:21:00 AM

Gina, so grateful for your enthusiastic support and I thank you for the fav. God bless you this Holy Week and Easter Sunday, sister!

Wendy Watson

Date: 4/11/2022 2:53:00 AM

Beautifully expressed thoughts, John, and as always that musicality of yours shines through in the rhythmic flow. Words like music can, it's true be so uplifting and having a little more time now, I too am enjoying reading poetry from some truly gifted contributors to this site. Have a blessed Easter. Wendy.

John Watt
Date: 4/11/2022 10:46:00 AM

Wendy, how lovely to see your smiling face and read your words of encouragement today! I am happy to hear your schedule has allowed for more poetry reading and writing, and I look forward to visiting your page soon to enjoy your musings. A blessed Easter to you, my friend ~ John

Laura Leiser

Date: 4/10/2022 9:29:00 PM

Congratulations, John, with your trophy win with this top notch poem! Well derseved, too! I think I commented earlier on it..very uplifting (literally!). :)

John Watt
Date: 4/11/2022 10:47:00 AM

Dear Laura, thank you for the return visit and your ongoing encouragement, it means so much to me. Blessings to you, sister ~ John

L Milton Hankins

Date: 4/10/2022 7:40:00 PM

John, I can only say that I hope all of our poems have similar uplifting results. I'm sorry you had this experience, but glad that we could help. Many of us write out of similar experiences. And, doubly glad, that you were able to express your feelings to us. Beautiful writing. Congratulations!

John Watt
Date: 4/10/2022 9:04:00 PM

Milt, so grateful for your empathetic kindness. Poetry soup helped me survive the pandemic without going insane. I appreciate all you do to encourage and support your fellow poets. As for the dreaded call, we are awaiting it any day, week, or month now. God bless you ~ John

Christuraj Alex

Date: 4/10/2022 7:15:00 PM

Great writing. Congratulations!

John Watt
Date: 4/10/2022 9:05:00 PM

Christuraj, thank you for stopping by to bless me with your kindness and congrats. Enjoy your day ~ John

Thompson Emate

Date: 4/10/2022 7:14:00 PM

This is indeed a beautiful and soul-uplifting poem. I'm glad I read it.

John Watt
Date: 4/10/2022 9:06:00 PM

Thompson, I so appreciate you thinking this is soul-uplifting, that was my desire. I am grateful for your time reading and commenting ~ John