David William Breidenthal Poet Senryu

I Need Some Motivation Right Now

Need motivation
Will you help me out somehow?
Felt so frustrated

Need motivation
Felt so jaded...hated...
I need some right now

Need motivation
I asked for inspiration
But, none have blossomed

Praying with raised hands
Reaching high to the blue sky
No one understands

I can't fathom this -
No ideas in mind sometimes
Need some happiness

Inspiration - come
Come on and dawn upon me
Bang me like a drum

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Wilma Neels April 15, 2020 at 4:01 AM Enjoyed your write today. Thank you for your comment on my featured poem :-) David William Breidenthal May 20, 2020 at 11:20 AM You're welcome! Any time. :) Thank you for your lovely comment on my poem today. ;) It's always Sunny in Havasu.

Debbie Guzzi April 13, 2020 at 4:57 PM I feel for you the world is overwhelming - too many words, not enough words, no words- I particularly liked how you ended this verse. BANG the drum loudly! Light & Love David William Breidenthal April 14, 2020 at 1:22 AM Thank you so much for your comment on my poem tonight :) -jwe