I Need

I need I need my space So go away I need my light back The one you dimmed I need my life back The one that never invited you in I need my rest The one you murdered a long time ago With all your lies I need my love back The one you mistreated and took for granted I need I want I am going to get back from you

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Shirley Hudson

Date: 7/13/2022 7:04:00 AM

Wow. Your poem moved me in ways I can't even describe. I have had a rough road trying to get back to walking again. You took the words right from my heart... The world can be so cruel and I'm mad I'm pissed and all I want to do is hide in the darkness. Your poem gave me hope the kind that makes it seem possible that the darkness will become light. Just yesterday I posted a poem called "Coming out of the darkness" then I see your poem....Fate. You wrote a great poem.

Haley Sheppard
Date: 7/24/2022 8:14:00 PM

I’m very glad that my words can bring hope to someone else, when I wrote this I was going through a very hard place, I hope that my poetry can maybe bring hope and peace to someone else and them know they aren’t alone.

Beata Agustin

Date: 6/30/2022 8:27:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." The Lord's blessings be with you.