I Must Tell You This

I must tell you this Valentine’s Day-our first
That you satisfy a longing thirst
With a love that is deeper, yet
Than any in the past has dealt

My spirit you light up with joy
Without you I sometimes feel lost
Now I look forward to a new day
My love I freely bring your way

Our vows, no secrets, no lies, we talk
Accepting each others’ flaws
Though bodies never yet entwine
Imaginings fly beyond the moon divine

Through verse and pen we explore
God’s blessings, our minds and hearts do implore
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Smith Avatar
February 23, 2010 at 9:14 AM
Hi, I enjoyed reading this amazing poem about lovers. Keep writing! ~ D. Smith
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February 14, 2010 at 9:02 PM
Audrey your welcome to contact me on my other poetry site all one word poetry poem . com /poet 3 2 3 8 This is another beautiful poem. thank you for sharing it with all of us here in poetry soup. have a wonderful evening, Dean
Guzzi Avatar
February 13, 2010 at 2:37 PM
what a good relationship! Light & Love
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February 12, 2010 at 9:36 PM
nice job on the reality of loving which is accepting the flaws and all. Nice Audrey. Robert
Ryerson Avatar
February 12, 2010 at 5:21 PM
'Accepting each others' flaws' is my favorite line in this one, Audrey...beautifully done! - Tim
Dietrich Avatar
February 12, 2010 at 4:40 PM
It sounds like a long distance relationship? I know many of those that have ended very well. REally nice, Audrey, and I love your title. Andrea
Chircop Avatar
February 12, 2010 at 4:04 PM
Beautiful poem from a very special person to another...Romantic..Wish you all the happiness in the world:)Charma
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February 12, 2010 at 1:32 PM
romantic poem, enjoyed
Hilliker Avatar
February 12, 2010 at 1:16 PM
Beautifully written sonnet. Congratulations on finding that someone special.
Hill Avatar
February 12, 2010 at 10:27 AM
Lovely write Audrey...full of feeling..TAH
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