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I Must Call On Life Beyond

The image reveals to its audience, four light slices of tall, stale bread
Being held upright alongside five glasses of warm, thickening honey
Filled to the very rim, coagulating as the bread stales due to time’s extended hold
A long table embracing these entities, blurry life buzzes in the backdrop

Neighboring me close, waiting to pervade me
Stands Opportunity, ambrosial in sight and smell—sticky in persistence
Opportunity is multitudinous, overflowing, enticing—though often overwhelming
Days pass and Opportunity lingers in different shades
Bright orange in corroding inspiration, spread around and behind
Even dark shades of its power peak out of the glasses waiting to break
Waiting to release its freedoms upon me—to freshen, moisten my stale existence
I continue to stand in equal portions, life outside a mere haze 
Distorted shapes afar…tranquil colors of whites, silvers and greens
They giggle, for as time passes, Opportunity is still good
Not I—no; I must stand wait forever on this wooden surface
Drying and aching for the moisture I cannot dream to touch
Though perhaps if life outside becomes clearer, a hand will reach for us, 
And I will be drenched in the generous overflow…a nourishment for all I know

For Giorgio A. V.'s Contest : Ekphrasis Contest 01
This was fun! Hope I followed the rules okay!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 5/7/2015 11:22:00 AM
Congratulations on your win a 7
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 5/8/2015 12:20:00 AM
Many thanks, Eve! ~Laura
Date: 5/6/2015 5:59:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work!!Sara
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 5/8/2015 12:19:00 AM
It was a pleasure, Sara. Thanks (8 ~Laura
Date: 5/6/2015 9:54:00 AM
Laura, :-) Congratulations with your wonderful win in Giorgio's "Ekphrasis" poetry contest. Forever *SKAT*
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 5/8/2015 12:19:00 AM
Thanks so much! ~Laura <3
Date: 5/5/2015 6:23:00 PM
Congratulations on your First Place win, Laura. I liked your interpretation, metaphors and imagery. Sandra
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 5/5/2015 8:37:00 PM
Thanks Sandra. Glad it read well. I was a little worried I wasnt following the rules. ~Laura
Date: 5/5/2015 3:05:00 PM
Very beautiful thoughts and expressions in your poem. Congratulations Laura on your fabulous win! love and smiles..
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 5/5/2015 8:35:00 PM
Gautami - I appreciate the visit! <3 Thanks!~Laura
Date: 5/5/2015 2:53:00 PM
Laura, this is deep, Congratulations on your awesome win. Love LINDA
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 5/5/2015 8:35:00 PM
Thanks Linda! Lots of love to you! ~Laura

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