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If peace is what you want Then, never think you can't If success is your true need A toiling life, you then lead If you love to change this World Be kind toward all, be never cold If happiness must spread everywhere To make all smile,you seriously prepare If positive growth must have to happen To exploit every talent, a way, you open If you want God to bless everyone Let praying acts be always done If you want all to be finely rich Inspire all to toil hard on this life-pitch

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Date: 1/20/2022 8:19:00 AM
Very profound advice and beautifully crafted poem. Blessings, Paulette
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Mv Venkataraman
Date: 6/4/2022 4:08:00 AM
You could kindly install a comment to make my feelings grow tall! Thanks
Date: 10/31/2021 6:15:00 AM
An inspirational piece of poetry in excellent couplets! Enjoyed reading. BW ~ Mala
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Mv Venkataraman
Date: 6/4/2022 4:09:00 AM
Your comment could finely cement my mind as I feel it is an increment to my poetic sentiment! Thanks.
Date: 5/12/2021 6:18:00 AM
Very inspirational, mv. Janice
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Mv Venkataraman
Date: 6/4/2022 4:10:00 AM
Your kind observation helps me gain more and more inspiration! Thanks.
Date: 5/12/2021 6:18:00 AM
Very inspirational, mv. Janice
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Mv Venkataraman
Date: 6/4/2022 4:12:00 AM
Kind words act as tonic so a positive action we soon pick up as our confidence becomes thick! Thanks
Date: 5/10/2021 4:27:00 PM
Some good pieces of advice here, mv!! Nice one
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Mv Venkataraman
Date: 6/4/2022 4:13:00 AM
When people are nobly good, kind words are by them said and by hope we are led and toward optimism we go ahead! Thanks
Date: 10/26/2020 2:02:00 AM
what uplifting lines and wise words, I am very surprised to be the first one to comment:-) hugs jan xx
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Mv Venkataraman
Date: 6/4/2022 4:16:00 AM
When noble souls begin to observe and when they kindly serve, they power our nerve and we feel we truly deserve all the encomiums that are made with verve! Thanks

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