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I Missed Your Birthday

Those 24 hours
I missed loving you
1440 minutes passed by
with no mention of you
86400 seconds my heart
was off duty
I wish with all my heart
I could make up with my Cutie

forgivenessfriendshipi do not know?

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Andrea Dietrich

January 25, 2012 at 7:36 PM

I searched and searched to find one I"d not yet seen and found this CUTIE!! VEry nice one, john.

Elizabeth Wesley

December 13, 2011 at 2:04 PM

24 hours can seem like forever. Hope all is well with you and time means nothing again!

Lisa Cooper

November 8, 2011 at 9:02 AM

very well penned, I envy your cutie ;)

Sara Kendrick

October 29, 2011 at 5:15 PM

Interesting work..Don't know what it is about exactly..If it is personal or if it is just about love with a little spat..Have not heard from you in awhile..The site being down and my time on now hurried and irregular hard to catch everyone..Sara