I Miss You

With you is a bliss
But your turn away from
The heart that feels an abyss
"I miss you" he says
"I really do" he resays
That's love from that & this
Tis as it is. Lips press .
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Shahein Avatar
December 16, 2015 at 6:49 AM
Unique poem but certainly in a beautiful way.. Hugs / / :D dalia.
Alhemaidy Avatar
December 16, 2015 at 3:58 PM
Thanks Dalia! More than once. Bless you.
Nickerson Avatar
January 26, 2014 at 7:45 PM
I do like your poem. Good work!
Alhemaidy Avatar
January 26, 2014 at 10:32 PM
Thanks Charlotte! Glad to read your pithy comment.
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