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I Miss You

I miss you, Missed the chats that we used to have, Missed your jokes that made me laughed, Missed my jokes that gave you the cramps, Missed the scoldings for our chats too long, Missed the talks about all our worries, Missed you being annoyed with me, Missed being told what a tube bulb I was, Missed your tireless effort in making me see, You were never in the flesh, But you impacted my life, You were close to my heart, But you left without saying bye, I miss you so much, I will always treasure us, I will miss that once upon a time, When you and I were one.

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Sally Eslinger

Date: 9/19/2021 9:06:00 PM

Hi, Kamisah, this a touching, moving poem. I think most of us have had one like this in our lives who now is missed for the same reasons. It made me smile how I shared those reasons! Note, in line 3, you might consider taking the Ed off Laugh. I’m 70 & still scolded for talking too long on phone to friends :) I’ve poem!

Kamisah Karim
Date: 6/17/2022 6:31:00 PM

Thank you for your comments and yes, I will edit the ed in line 3. My bad. It's nice to have someone sharing the same thoughts and I have. I really miss this dear friend. She passed away suddenly.