I Miss You

I MISS YOU
                        I 
      I miss you,My Dear, Oh! My sweetheart
      Whenever you stay away from me:
      Color of life fades, being apart.
      When together, me frolic and free.
     
      Whenever you stay away from me
     I lose interest in my routine.
     When together, me frolic and free, 
     gaining vigor: What I say, I mean.
     
      I lose interest in my routine,
     not to see your face at early dawn. 
     Gaining vigor, what I say, I mean:
     As soon as you appear, sloth gone.
       
     Not to see your face at early dawn
    I become inactive, lethargic 
     As soon as you appear, sloth gone.
     I rejoice turning energetic
    
     I become inactive, lethargic
     without you: With you I am alert.
     I rejoice turning energetic.                   
    I miss you, My Dear, Oh! My sweetheart.      



   02/21/20

  'A Rhyming Pantoum of five stanzas

Contest by L MILTON HANKINS
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Roper Avatar
February 29, 2020 at 12:33 AM
Such a sad poem, Anisha, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
Dutta Avatar
February 29, 2020 at 7:05 AM
Thanks Eve.Love.
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