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I Miss Loving You

I miss opening my arms to something new In promises were wrapped in my nights. I miss the long journey I made to find you The courage to move on in front of the red lights. I even miss the barriers I chose to confront So stern they were never leaving room. Waves and fire were behind us in this hunt Where preys could do nothing but to accept their doom. I miss the sunshine waving at your eyes The passed moments melted like clocks. Those words trying to hide into the dark disguise The fleeting perfumes I found in the Pandora's box. I miss the way I laughed, the way I cried Each way you had to open,and each I walked with you. The rhythm moving our hearts made them collide And I knew right from the start, I'd just miss loving you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/8/2011 4:35:00 AM
Many congrat's on your HM. dear Valenia, with this wonderful rendering. Lainie
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Date: 4/7/2011 9:07:00 AM
Congratulations Valeria on your honored success. Agape, Moses
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Date: 4/6/2011 11:51:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Drake's contest Valeria. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/6/2011 10:11:00 AM
congrats on your win in Drakes contest, nicely penned
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Date: 4/6/2011 5:54:00 AM
Congratulations on the HM win in the contest of Drake, valeria
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Date: 4/6/2011 5:11:00 AM
Congrats Valeria on your HM in Drake's cool contest with this wonderful write and excellent entry luv.. enjoy your very special honor for a magnificent poem...
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Date: 4/6/2011 5:00:00 AM
This was a very heartwarming piece. This pulled my strings a bit. You earned Honorable mention in my contest. Thank you for this. Beautiful work.
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Date: 11/17/2010 6:08:00 PM
a sweet and heart touching write, enjoyed,..p.d.
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