I Miss Loving You

I miss opening my arms to something new
In promises were wrapped in my nights.
I miss the long journey I made to find you
The courage to move on in front of the red lights.

I even miss the barriers I chose to confront
So stern they were never leaving room.
Waves and fire were behind us in this hunt
Where preys could do nothing but to accept their doom.

I miss the sunshine waving at your eyes
The passed moments melted like clocks.
Those words trying to hide into the dark disguise
The fleeting perfumes I found in the Pandora's box.

I miss the way I laughed, the way I cried
Each way you had to open,and each I walked with you.
The rhythm moving our hearts made them collide
And I knew right from the start, I'd just miss loving you.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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George   Avatar
April 8, 2011 at 4:35 AM
Many congrat's on your HM. dear Valenia, with this wonderful rendering. Lainie
Freeman Avatar
April 7, 2011 at 9:07 AM
Congratulations Valeria on your honored success. Agape, Moses
Brown Avatar
April 6, 2011 at 11:51 AM
Congratulations on your win in Drake's contest Valeria. Love, Carol
Roberts Avatar
April 6, 2011 at 10:11 AM
congrats on your win in Drakes contest, nicely penned
Mehta Avatar
April 6, 2011 at 5:54 AM
Congratulations on the HM win in the contest of Drake, valeria
Sweetheart Avatar
April 6, 2011 at 5:11 AM
Congrats Valeria on your HM in Drake's cool contest with this wonderful write and excellent entry luv.. enjoy your very special honor for a magnificent poem...
Tacito Avatar
April 6, 2011 at 5:00 AM
This was a very heartwarming piece. This pulled my strings a bit. You earned Honorable mention in my contest. Thank you for this. Beautiful work.
A   Avatar
November 17, 2010 at 6:08 PM
a sweet and heart touching write, enjoyed,..p.d.
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