I Miss

I miss the remedies of our past selves, I miss the extract of blight from the tip of your lips. I miss your abstract sunrise tumbling down your shoulders, I miss the offset emeralds looking outward. I miss our blaze that once caught the world on fire, I miss the passionate extremities of our youth. I miss the quite afterthoughts of the nights spent together, I miss the way you removed me from my paradox. I miss our alikeness, our kindled spirit, I missed your final words. I miss, I missed.

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Jeremy Proehl

Date: 7/24/2016 2:50:00 PM

Hi Aaron, I like poems that use a repetitive format like this. I loved the line: I miss the quite afterthoughts of the nights spent together. I wish you all the best with your writing and schooling. JP

Jesse Zerlaut

Date: 7/12/2016 7:14:00 PM

Aaron, your poem is hauntingly beautiful and deep, touching points many face in relationships. Welcome to Poetry Soup!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/28/2016 1:21:00 PM

Aaron, Awesome first post, You must be an accomplished writer. Hope to see you FLOURISH among this rock solid community of amateur poets. You are going to love it here. Fast;) Linda

Aaron Mcintosh
Date: 6/29/2016 9:14:00 PM

Thank you! My major is currently Creative writing with a minor in Literature and it's always been a passion of mine to write. And I'm truly enjoying this community so far!

Skat A

Date: 6/28/2016 12:15:00 PM

Not sure what this is, but good to see another one from you. SO much missing on this list... Welcome aboard. Ynr-Skat

Aaron Mcintosh
Date: 6/29/2016 9:15:00 PM

It's basically to be abstract to let the reader make of it what they think/feel. Thank you and glad to be aboard!