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I miss the days and nights whether sun or rain where I would run through a meadow of tall grass to reach the woods of Elm and Hickory trees where a shallow rippling stream covered limestone rocks beneath a bridge of concrete and iron where my boys and I would play like mountain men, searching for beaver pelts building our small forts to launch attacks from before swinging on ropes we hung from tree limbs trying to be Tarzan until we slowly headed home, searching for fossils along the banks of the stream, until dark our small band of brothers, who thought we were mountain men would always make it home to our mothers who waited for our return with a hot tasty supper made from old recipes handed down these were the days of freedom it all passed so quickly...so quickly

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Date: 8/8/2024 7:03:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning work. I am delighted to see it on the winners' list. Way to go..Sara K
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Date: 8/8/2024 4:00:00 AM
Dear Frederick for some reason i did think this poem belongs to you, you always have a way with painting imagery in such a flawless manner. In such captivating cadence! And i love the details of innocence of childhood that youv described to your readers in such a vivid manner! It reminded me of my childhood too whenever i used to visit grandmas island! Beautiful! I love it! And the ending is stunning! Such a soulful poem flowing with nostalgia! Well done! Congratulations on your win
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Date: 7/23/2024 5:01:00 AM
Good times were had back then. You write of them well.
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Date: 7/22/2024 4:48:00 PM
Hello Frederic :-) Very nice read! Best wishes & good luck, have a nice day ~ AA
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